|Reviews for The Golden Flash|
| OriksGaming chapter 1 . 1/16
You really need a beta. There are so many errors, and even one in the summary . . . .
| Mr. 666 chapter 5 . 1/15
I hate naruhina fanfiction
I hate hinata because she is a self centered hypocrite
| Wow chapter 7 . 9/6/2015
You killed this fic by making him to op then ripping his arm off...
| Sekirei no 109 chapter 2 . 8/18/2015
the idea is good but if u want people to continue reading there is a certain way to write fanfics. why not try observing another one.
heres an example. s/3482048/1/rebirth-of-chaos
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/9/2015
Man whiles reading this i just had the impulse to wright this : you get so caught up in the story aspect you don't concentrat on the spelling , now i know nobody's perfect and i know i'm bad at grammar and spelling but this story could be a lot better if you got a beta or a least reread the things that you wright . I don't know you so i can't just say that your bad at spelling i'm just saying that the most basic thing about wrighting is to first get spelling nailed , then knowing how to contitue a phrase and the last thing to know is at least the basics of punctuation and pluriels .
| Loner Kid chapter 7 . 10/5/2014
alright. This is just a mess
| Loner Kid chapter 2 . 10/5/2014
U have sooooo many grammar mistakes. You should seriously get a beta reader.
| XxElementalStormxX chapter 16 . 9/2/2014
Why most of the Naruto time travel to the past fan fiction had stop why...why why. Why!
| Kittens Kat chapter 16 . 6/29/2014
I ENJOYED READING YOUR STORY! THANK YOU!
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/20/2014
| Potterformers chapter 2 . 9/18/2013
| pete chapter 16 . 8/20/2013
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/22/2013
What is the demon mask?
| didibee123 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
really good. i like how naruto an hinata are being cute and just awwww kawaii
| Luana LS chapter 6 . 3/2/2013
NaruHina for sure!