Reviews for The Golden Flash
Guest chapter 2 . 7/9
Man whiles reading this i just had the impulse to wright this : you get so caught up in the story aspect you don't concentrat on the spelling , now i know nobody's perfect and i know i'm bad at grammar and spelling but this story could be a lot better if you got a beta or a least reread the things that you wright . I don't know you so i can't just say that your bad at spelling i'm just saying that the most basic thing about wrighting is to first get spelling nailed , then knowing how to contitue a phrase and the last thing to know is at least the basics of punctuation and pluriels .
Loner Kid chapter 7 . 10/5/2014
alright. This is just a mess
Loner Kid chapter 2 . 10/5/2014
U have sooooo many grammar mistakes. You should seriously get a beta reader.
XxElementalStormxX chapter 16 . 9/2/2014
Why most of the Naruto time travel to the past fan fiction had stop why...why why. Why!
Kittens Kat chapter 16 . 6/29/2014
I ENJOYED READING YOUR STORY! THANK YOU!
Guest chapter 16 . 4/20/2014
supert history
Potterformers chapter 2 . 9/18/2013
this sucks
pete chapter 16 . 8/20/2013
great story
Guest chapter 3 . 4/22/2013
What is the demon mask?
didibee123 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
really good. i like how naruto an hinata are being cute and just awwww kawaii
Luana LS chapter 6 . 3/2/2013
NaruHina for sure!
xaburame15 chapter 7 . 1/30/2013
For the rin character are you trying to make her different? Because she was only a support medic-nin and was never trained tsunade
madman chapter 16 . 1/27/2013
really you just quit? thats sad
midnightblupuppy chapter 16 . 11/2/2012
please update
Random Chick chapter 12 . 10/31/2012
Yay! Matsuri! Was this a sign of GaaMatsu? Hmm, hmm? ;)
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