Reviews for The Golden Flash
Last true Naruto fan chapter 5 . 12/28/2016
Before you read this fanfic read the review this is not another to fanfiction too much military dialogue in whenever because she refers to his steam the ship referred to as team not subordinates the hidden Leaf ninjas of other Villages have come to the chunin exam not the entire world and said different nationalities to the chunin exams this is this is not a Naruto fanfiction disregard all the route to fanfiction that have very similar title in military realistic dialogue ignore all of them go to Star Wars fanfiction that much better of you like Star Wars these are not Naruto fanfiction so disregard any now to fanfiction has military dialogue because it does not Naruto in Naruto hidden Leaf the ninjas of mercenaries but they don't treat each other with rank insubordination and Hinata fanfiction that has reference The Military Diet login is not Naruto it's the idiots attempt to americanize Naruto or he's a hack writer he is not a fan of never to disregard any of his material story that contain any any Naruto fanfiction that has military descriptions of the characters without the proper term is not now to fanfiction and don't let them convince you when he says fanfiction it's his lazy excuse for before sucking right and so is my future advice to anyone reads as if you do not need an email to fanfiction go right to Star Wars or some other fanfiction you better off with it these people are highly immature not all of them but a good amount of them happy holidays everyone if you need what actually anime Naruto and Naruto Shippuden look it up on the internet you'll see how screwed up the fanfiction s
Dylan chapter 16 . 11/14/2016
Fuck you I loved this fabric and you just stop well just fuck you
MONGOLIAN13th chapter 1 . 9/24/2016
will try view once I read
OriksGaming chapter 1 . 1/16/2016
You really need a beta. There are so many errors, and even one in the summary . . . .
Mr. 666 chapter 5 . 1/15/2016
I hate naruhina fanfiction

I hate hinata because she is a self centered hypocrite
Wow chapter 7 . 9/6/2015
You killed this fic by making him to op then ripping his arm off...
EMIYA KURO chapter 2 . 8/18/2015
the idea is good but if u want people to continue reading there is a certain way to write fanfics. why not try observing another one.
heres an example. s/3482048/1/rebirth-of-chaos
Guest chapter 2 . 7/9/2015
Man whiles reading this i just had the impulse to wright this : you get so caught up in the story aspect you don't concentrat on the spelling , now i know nobody's perfect and i know i'm bad at grammar and spelling but this story could be a lot better if you got a beta or a least reread the things that you wright . I don't know you so i can't just say that your bad at spelling i'm just saying that the most basic thing about wrighting is to first get spelling nailed , then knowing how to contitue a phrase and the last thing to know is at least the basics of punctuation and pluriels .
Loner Kid chapter 7 . 10/5/2014
alright. This is just a mess
Loner Kid chapter 2 . 10/5/2014
U have sooooo many grammar mistakes. You should seriously get a beta reader.
XxElementalStormxX chapter 16 . 9/2/2014
Why most of the Naruto time travel to the past fan fiction had stop why...why why. Why!
Kittens Kat chapter 16 . 6/29/2014
I ENJOYED READING YOUR STORY! THANK YOU!
Guest chapter 16 . 4/20/2014
supert history
Potterformers chapter 2 . 9/18/2013
this sucks
pete chapter 16 . 8/20/2013
great story
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