Reviews for The Unexpected Gift
xs chapter 24 . 4/25
Simply amazing. I have not seen that perfect balance between a story and the adult content it contains in so long! Even though it's been a long yime since i read fifty shades trilogy, i still can't come to grips with an adult writing a best seller without putting in a proper story. In that regard, yours would've been better. Granted, it could have done with a better epilogue. It was written imperfectly.
JSemillano chapter 25 . 4/10
I love the srory . . Kip it up :)
grammar chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Whether not weather
usa-chan chapter 24 . 11/29/2014
I just want to thank you for this amazing story. I was totally hooked with it, I love it. This is one of my top 5 Naruhina favorites ever.
usa-chan chapter 22 . 11/29/2014
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL.
usa-chan chapter 20 . 11/29/2014
Cute Kiba-kun
usa-chan chapter 19 . 11/29/2014
I love Kiba and Hinata together, their relationship is so cute.
usa-chan chapter 17 . 11/29/2014
Sasuke is a jerk, but well that's nothing new. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one, I just stop to leave a review so everyone now you are and awesome writer.
usa-chan chapter 16 . 11/29/2014
So sweet :)
usa-chan chapter 15 . 11/29/2014
I really liked the stare fight between Kiba and Naruto.
usa-chan chapter 14 . 11/29/2014
Hot ;)
usa-chan chapter 11 . 11/28/2014
A few errors but nothing big. I luuuuv this. Bad Hiashi!
usa-chan chapter 10 . 11/28/2014
Oh- my -god. Next chapter now! I need to wake up tomorrow early in the morning, but I don't care at all
usa-chan chapter 9 . 11/28/2014
I love team 8 I absolutely love the way you portrayed Kiba.
usa-chan chapter 8 . 11/28/2014
Yes! Finally together
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