This story was very emotional and pulled at my heart strings. Very beautifully written. I am speechless.

Very moving end piece. I teared up and cried softly.

Gorgeous fic. I like that you have Sheppard still being awkward and yet determined to help. And it was nice to see Rodney finally deal with the event of Carson's death. Thanks for sharing!

Thanks for writing this - I think it was majorly theraputic for me. Carson is a terrible person to lose.

"'I want to ask you something...why did you come... that day?' 'You don't know?' Sheppard seemed to consider for a moment, then said, 'What would Carson have done.. if he'd been here?'" Aww! I miss him. *virtual hug to you*

Miss Anderton

May he rest in peace.

*tear*

"Sheppard was doing the ‘feelings’ thing and sucking at it, big time." Haha!

Again with the heart breaking!

Loved this little story to death. The characterizations of John & Rodney in this fik was just wonderfully done and sweet and sad all at the same time. Plus...Rodney's reaction when John spit on the little pyramid was just priceless. X3

Rodney's pain is all enveloping. I can feel the lump in my own throat!

Such a sensitive portrayal of Rodney at such a traumatic time.

Aw...I loved this! I dont think I've read a tag for Sunday that was done quite this way - nice!

That was touching, heart wrenching and beautiful. Thanks.

Love this! OMG... so heartwrenching. And beautiful writing. My favorite:

The day was moving into late afternoon and the sun no longer had its earlier brightness. He stood motionless, casting a gray shadow in the watery sunlight.

Very, very nice.

Wow, that was so moving. I am all teary eyed. Love the friendship between Rodney and Sheppard. I always thought there should have been a scene like this for Rodney. That he would avoid the infirmary because of his grief over Carson.

It seemed odd that Rodney would say that Carson was his best friend when it seemed that he spent more time with Sheppard. Your mentioning that they had meet first in Antartica makes that statement make more sense. Rodney would have known him longer then any other member of the expedition. I like that it was Carson that started the friendship.

Thanks.

great wokr!

What a beautifully written story. So emotional - I admit to having a lump in my throat!

Rodney at the end was simply perfect.