| Reviews for Force Bond 1: Orphan |
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  Redone chapter 5 . 7/10/2001 Nice story, but IMHO regarding the end, the story seems practically unfinished. It needs some more stuff before the end, like Vader's reaction to this, and who's the attacker - and for that matter, what became of the spindly alien, was he the same as the attacker? Did Vader take Luke with him, how did Palpy react to this? But I loved the hospital scene, it was very nicely done; also, the action at the end was great, even though you just bringing in another player - the attacker - might seem overdoing it. All in all with some more work it could make an absolutely stunning story! -Red |
 Melpemone chapter 5 . 7/10/2001 That was GREAT. Part 2 please! |
| sb chapter 1 . 7/9/2001 This is great! From the title you give the impression that there is going to be a sequel. I hope so |
| KSkywalker chapter 5 . 7/9/2001 The End? Noooooooooooo! |
| met19 chapter 5 . 7/9/2001 who's the attacker? but other than that it was GREAT! |
| Nomi Sunrider chapter 5 . 7/9/2001 I hope you write a sequal |
| Amy Lee chapter 5 . 7/9/2001 Fantastic! I can't wait for more! You've written this fic very well and it was a pleasure to read. |
| Stolen Flame chapter 5 . 7/9/2001 This was really good. I definitely enjoyed it. How about a sequel, to tell us who the mysterious darkside attacker was, and also, how do Luke and Vader get on? |
| Liz Jade Skywalker chapter 5 . 7/9/2001 That's the END! It couldn't be! More more more! |