This is a good story and I like it a lot. It is very interesting and well-written. Thank You for writing this!

An interesting premise. I like how you realistically portrayed that witnessing a murder can cause a child to lose his ability to speak and I do like it that Palpatine isn't omniscient here though I find that a bit hard to believe. That man has always been one step ahead of everyone. Nevertheless, it's a wonderful start to a awesome series. :D

This is maybe the 5 th fanfic I've read for sw. I must say that this story had me, from beginning to end, constantly needing to know what happened next. Very well written and organized. Mad kudos to you, writer. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you!

awwww Luke socializes with a Stormtrooper! that, I have never seen in a fanfic

Vader with ruthless carnivorous pets is the best thing ever. plus they are freaking father and son, likewise to Vader and Luke. awesome.

And there we go. Poor Ben...

I feel sorry for Tis but at the same time NO

I am tempted to bash my head against the wall

That's not what that bastard said on Tattoine.

Oh fuck did Obi-wan die?!

Oh this is gonna get ugly

I hope the Senator does something stupid and gets the beejesus scared out of him. Also wouldn't it look strange if he just kept Luke for three months? How would he explain that to the press?
Daaaaaang Luke and Vader keep missing each other

Father & son are about to meet. And I really do hope it is a happy one

Luke is a sweetheart and so is LJ

Why do I have the feeling Luke is going to have the best pet ever?