|Reviews for Spiritus Bellum|
| Cigarettes And Moonlight chapter 4 . 1/18/2009
This is really good so far. You have such good descriptions!
And I love the original characters! The only problem is that some of the paragraphs run together a bit! Sometimes it gets confusing as to who's talking.
Otherwise, great story so far and keep up the good work.
| ThirteenParrots chapter 3 . 5/3/2007
Really good story so far, every is well described and easily brings images to your mind. The two main characters so are likable and interesting. The paragraphs need to be broken up a bit, mainly to help show better who is actually speaking. Otherwise great story so far and keep up the good work. Look forward to more parts of this story.