Reviews for Dont' touch my girl
Django8 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008


Kitten-the-Wolf chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
You should write the names with a captical letter at the begining like: Roy
J.F Posey chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
totally random but cute
DemonKatsu chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
can you write more please
Mika the Dark princess chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
There are two things wrong with this story one " I need to check your wound to stay down." That to should so. second is that " so bad sit." That so should be to.
Kitty Howell chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
Wasn't worth finishing.
Isabella Rain chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
that was funny and totally random...
Cyrox chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
Do you even know what Roy Mustang is like? He does not hit on every girl he sees, and I doubt he would be interested in one as young as Kagome.

Not to mention that Inuyasha does allow Kagome to treat his injuries. Have you even watched passed the first ten episodes?

Finally, work on your spelling and grammar.