|Reviews for Of Durmstrang Rewrite|
| Lora2603 chapter 13 . 11/28/2013
Continue the story!
| kateplay chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
what a place to stop the story hope you update soon
| Sg1robinson chapter 13 . 9/25/2013
I am crushed. They took Sirius. Bad Evildore! Stupid Fudge! Crazy Moody! Harry should punish them all! Poor Hermione! Things are going to get very bad aren't they? Waiting patiently for your update. Brilliant chapter!
| Sg1robinson chapter 12 . 9/25/2013
Evildore should be killed. I almost hate to read on. Will Harry hate Hermione? Hermione will be crushed! Kill Dumbledore!
| Sg1robinson chapter 9 . 9/21/2013
I apologize for not reviewing sooner. I have been caught up in your revision of your previous story and I am in awe! You took a story that I liked and made it even better! EPIC! Got to go now, there's another chapter waiting!
| Sakura Lisel chapter 13 . 9/4/2013
Aww... you should continue this COOL story. Though I'm confused. Why are Dumbledore and the ministry STILL after Sirius and NOT Know where Sirius was before Hermione told them? Didn't MANY chapters ago, Dumbledore and th ministry ALREADY encounter Sirius who TOLD them and even showed them PROOF that he was found innocent of his supposed crimes, and that until he was SUMMONED for a trial in Britiain to clarify whether he WASN'T guilty or not, Dumbledore himself had told Sirius to stay on the Durmstrang boat until the trial? So why are they acting like the earlier meeting and promises never happened?
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/30/2013
Please continue writing this story.
| vysirez chapter 13 . 8/28/2013
I have to say I'm a bit confused about chapters 12 and 13. They seem to be ignoring what happened at the end of the first task. While I will admit that Sirius Black showing up at the end of the task wasn't completely overt, I got the impression a fair number of people were aware of his presence. Then chapters 12 and 13 come along and it's a big secret again. Otherwise I've liked the story so far.
| CaBuckeye chapter 9 . 4/20/2013
...because you two want to live voraciously through me... I believe that the "v" word that you are looking for is 'vicariously'. I am sure that it was just a bad day for your spell checker. Please, pretty please with fairy dust on it, continue this story. The premise is one that I do not normally come across in the HHr realm and I am a voracious reader. 8-)
| Ariz0na-Sky chapter 13 . 4/7/2013
Ohhhh i hope Hermione fixes what she did! I'm a disappointed in her, she should've listened to her gut.
| October25 chapter 13 . 1/24/2013
I noticed you haven't updated in a couple months writer's block? I hope for more soon, as I find this a great read, and I really want to know what happens next!
| Hogwarts Alum 53 chapter 13 . 1/20/2013
I like the re-write so far but the eternal self-sacrificing and cliche responses of the characters need to end. I hope to see a little more originality in the personalities and a bit more rage from the constantly betrayed and forgiving Harry.
| concept human chapter 13 . 1/3/2013
And you ended it with a cliffhanger. You need to recheck this rewrite, there are so many missing words as well as words that are doubled, typos as well. Plot wise its so-so, I would've expected more interaction with the champions since this being tri-wizard centered.
Are you going to use the book's chronological succession of who figured out the second task first? (if I remembered correctly it was Cedric who figured it out first, not sure about Fleur though). In addition, I thought you would accelerate everyone in Potter's year and that confused me when I saw Susan interacting with Ginny. Next is the fact that since Harry is the head of a house and heir-apparent to one (or does the significance of the ring meant that he's already the head?) won't that automatically emancipate him? Thus not needing of a guardian?
Seriously though, I suggest looking at this once again (with a proof reader as well), some errors are blatantly obvious while some you can ignore and continue on reading.
| cyiusblack chapter 13 . 12/18/2012
| vampiremuggle chapter 13 . 11/25/2012
Awesome story! I love it! I'm not usually a big fan of Harry/Hermione pairings, but this story is definitely an exception :) Please update soon - I cannot wait to read what happens next!
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