|Reviews for Falling For the First Time|
| Raven the Joker chapter 18 . 7/8/2007
Hmm not as bloody as the last chapter. But anyway! The next chapter should be good, since Phantom has finally shown his face. xD Hope it'll come out soon.
And the 5 preview sentences sounded good, I can imagine it well (along with music)
Btw, I'm done with ze pics. Ya can check at my profile (at the bottom).
| Taisaya-Ryu chapter 18 . 7/8/2007
Wait... Kuno's related to Alviss... sorta? I'm confused! And, if i'm not mistaken (I think I am) is Schadenfruede german? I noticed the Fruede means Friend, But I suck at spelling in German, so I might be wrong. eitherway, update soon~
| Taisaya-Ryu chapter 17 . 7/6/2007
O.o; okay... You said next chapter is like that too? Do I HAVE to read it?
| Taisaya-Ryu chapter 16 . 7/6/2007
Alviss better not commit suicide! I'll go after you with a stick if you make him die, I don't know how I'd pull that one off o.o; Also, If typing so much hurts you, you should limit yourself. I try to keep only two stories at once, and that sorta works out! -;
| Raven the Joker chapter 17 . 7/4/2007
Oh noes! Where did the funny and innocent Suzaku go.. And the torturing scene reminds me of Hostel somehow. xD The funny episode became a bloody and violent in your hand.
Can't wait for the next chap. Hope ya'll update soon.
| catnyp chapter 17 . 7/3/2007
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update ) i luve this story so... nice :D please update thank you. I luff alviss so cute
| Marchenplushie28 chapter 17 . 7/3/2007
I've been in total shock since Nanashi said he fell in love with Alviss, that was unexcpected.
| Reanna-Kris-Katelyn chapter 17 . 7/2/2007
AWESOME! SO COOL! I LOVE IT! Poor Al-Chan... That's plain disgusting... Great cover story though... LOL... Shikaku's gunna be in deep shit when Alviss Remembers...
| mimeus chapter 17 . 7/1/2007
Thanks for the update!
| Sayaka Nagisa-ChangeMermaid chapter 17 . 7/1/2007
Nice chapter. Please continue soon.
| xChibiTenshix chapter 17 . 7/1/2007
omg! i'm in love with this chapter right now! mostly cuz of the way you killed jupiter and venus...it was so sick and twisted..but that's okie, i love those kinds of things P looks like my friends were right..i am sort of a sadist. who knew. anyways..update soon! hehe...alviss and nanashi should so be together - i like that pairing more than ginta with alviss, it just seems cuter to me...sorry..but i really don't like gintaxalviss very much..no offense
| Battle-Royalist chapter 17 . 6/30/2007
Whoa now nanashi going for alviss now! im confused now!
| Reanna-Kris-Katelyn chapter 16 . 6/28/2007
YAY! *dances* I love it! *Hugs random Chess piece who just HAPPENED to walk by* ISN'T it great!
C.P: Um... let go?
CP: I'll kill you...
Me: *LOLs* I have a zombie tattoo...
CP: *Le Gasp* You BELONG to Phantom-sama?
Me: Yes... I make him good... *launches into a rant about how Phantom is secretly being mind controlled by the queen*
CP: ... Wow...
| Marchenplushie28 chapter 16 . 6/27/2007
To insult Ginta's friends, right to his face, those people are idiots!
| Raven the Joker chapter 16 . 6/27/2007
-Claps claps- Hooray for new chapter! Seriously I hate YouTube for delete (almost) all of anime. even othersites I found deleted half of MAR episodes, I managed to watch episode 1-26 only. :(
But anyway! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
P/S: Zonnens reminds me of the sailors from Sailor Moon. LOL.