|Reviews for Sleep Bone|
| Jazz chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
what about you could do like how he met sakura? and that he passes out from a worse headache and kikyo has to figure out how to help him
| AstarteLuna chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
hi awesome story and chapter please update soon. please e-mail me when you put the next chapter on thanks and good luck.
| Yuti-Chan chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
| kirayasha aka kira chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Yes, it's called a futon. *smiles*
Instead of giving you ideas, I want to know where would you like to go with this?
Instead of sleeping, Suikotsu but turned to a hole in the rice paper of the door where moonlight streamed through. That sentence would read better if you deleted the "but."
Also I'm getting the mental image that Suikotsu is sitting there dreaming, but I think your intention was he was really lying down to sleep, no?
Anyway I hope you'll continue with it...
| JazkaStar chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
Ooh. Like it. Write more. *please* _
| Cold Kikyo chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
I like it,but i have no ideas,sorry.
But real good chapter. _
| AttilaTheBunny chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
So far, this seems good! I don't have any ideas, but I'm gonna Story Alert this and I'll try to review after each chapter. Only one thing... Doesn't Kikyou have brown eyes not blue ones? If you already know that and you did on purpose, sorry. Please update soon!