|Reviews for Evolution|
| the Golden Girl chapter 22 . 2/22
I love your Severus/Harry father/son stories please do a sequel to Evolution thanks from the Golden Girl of Gryffindor
| Guest chapter 22 . 2/18
I have been reading this story for the past week and I truly enjoyed it! Hopefully you will update it one day :) xx
| SakuraKoi chapter 9 . 2/4
Harry is a good boy
| SakuraKoi chapter 8 . 2/4
| SakuraKoi chapter 7 . 2/4
| SakuraKoi chapter 6 . 2/4
| SakuraKoi chapter 5 . 2/4
Die old coot
| SakuraKoi chapter 4 . 2/4
| SakuraKoi chapter 3 . 2/4
| SakuraKoi chapter 2 . 2/4
Stupid old coot
| SakuraKoi chapter 1 . 2/4
| Leander chapter 22 . 12/22/2013
I think Harry's being a bit unreasonable about Severus. I mean...considering his neglect and abuse, why is a study and daily schedule too much for him? I dunno...I like this so far, but some parts of it seem unrealistic. Harry's behaving more like a five year old than a boy of nearly 12 in some parts and in others...I just don't know.
And to weigh in...I prefer them being referred to as Harry and Severus when not in dialogue with others. It is confusing otherwise and difficult to connect to.
| Guest chapter 22 . 12/18/2013
Please update soon!
| missgsmith51 chapter 22 . 12/8/2013
Yay! I'm waiting for the day when Minerva makes Albus "rue."pleas hurry back and get us there.
Are you planning to finish this story? I see that it has been just a few days shy of four years (!) since the last chapter update. I dearly hope an update is imminent.
| missgsmith51 chapter 21 . 12/8/2013
Interesting to read how Harry felt about being forced into the persona of a ten-year-old, which is really two years younger than his age. I suppose that looking at it as a chance to "do over" that age makes it a little easier to take.
That last scene with McGonagall was very sweet and poignant. It sounds as though she had played the role of his grandma in Harry's infancy. No wonder she's ticked at Albus for how he's treating Harry.