Reviews for Time to make a change
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 16 . 7/22/2009
man, teenage pregnancy. that shit's tough. hope hinata says who her baby-daddy is.
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 15 . 7/22/2009
hmm. SOMEONE doesn't like tenten...could it be...the author! meh, i'm not a HUGE fan, but i like her a whole hell of a lot better than ino. she gets on my nerves big time.
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 14 . 7/22/2009
ahh! humongous paragraph. 'sokay! it was sekesie anyways!
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 13 . 7/22/2009
i'm sure ino would have something to say about what white roses mean. man, i hope neji didn't get them from her...
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 12 . 7/22/2009
boo! make out already! gah. sometimes teenagers can be so blind.
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 11 . 7/22/2009
oh! sekesie!
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 10 . 7/22/2009
gah! teh angst! teh angst!
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 9 . 7/22/2009
damn! that neji is one stone-cold bastard. i mean, wow.
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 8 . 7/22/2009
man, one time i burned the crap out of my forehead with a flatiron - it REALLY hurt.
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 7 . 7/22/2009
i always feel so sorry for Hinata - it's gotta be terrible being so shy...
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 6 . 7/22/2009
yup, arranged marriage. in the last paragraph i think you mean latter, not later. is okay, i liked the chapter even with the grammatical mistake!
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 5 . 7/22/2009
um... arranged marriage?
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 4 . 7/22/2009
gah! short! also, i think you mean phase (a period of time) instead of faze in the third sentence.
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 3 . 7/22/2009
it's kinda funny that neji would notice how good a mom hinata would be (i think she would be, anyway). maybe he's thinkin' about baby-makin'!
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
well, i'm not seeing any GLARING typographical or grammatical mistakes. you're a pretty good writer. good chapter, too. a little short.
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