Reviews for Running Away From Sharp Blades
The Cloaked Emo chapter 11 . 2/16/2008
Wow, I love this fic. This is one of my fav couples so I can't wait to read the sequel. I noticed some minor grammatical errors but that's only because I'm a grammar fiend. That, and you said that you weren't very good at english. I'm gonna go read the sequel now. :D
call me CoCo chapter 11 . 6/3/2007
I TOTALLY loved that fic. A bit dificult to understand at times - not your fault - but really, really good.
Bar-Ohki chapter 11 . 5/17/2007
Cute.
HarlequinBeckett chapter 11 . 5/15/2007
aw me likey
Huntress Arashi chapter 9 . 5/10/2007
To KAyla...

I'm sorry but I think you misunderstood me...

Riza was commanding Haru(that man/gay we're talking about) to cut her hair... this is the punishment... and Haru said "Oh, God this is punishment for all the bad things that I’ve done!" He was like being punished because of these 'bad things'...whatever those bad things are, we don't know... but when he said "I’ll stop being gay just tell me this isn’t real" it was like he's risking his gender just to prove to himself that he's just dreaming/imagining things. It was just like pinching yourself when you feel like you're dreaming... or he's just like trying to do something he thought was impossible to determine if what was happening was real...

sorry I can't explain it to you clearly because I'm not really good in english... and I know it's my fault that you misunderstood me... I'm very sorry for that... I wish you're reading this...

and of course, there's nothing wrong being gay... I have a lot of friends who are gays and they were the ones who gave me that idea...

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KAyla chapter 11 . 5/10/2007
Very choppy, but had a good Idea...Just needed to fill in some spots with more detail and more of what was going on...

I also Didnt like how you put the man saying something like he is being punished for something "Ill stop being gay!"

That, I found, was rather rude...There is nothing wrong with being gay, therefore he would not be punished for it.

Kinda sounds like the story was written by a 11 year old...to put it politely.
JenovaJuice97 chapter 11 . 5/7/2007
nicely done
JenovaJuice97 chapter 4 . 5/7/2007
i agree it was sweet in an odd roy-way
JenovaJuice97 chapter 2 . 5/7/2007
i love the 'power abuse' line
JenovaJuice97 chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
i like how all the guys like freak out
MoonStarDutchess chapter 11 . 5/5/2007
This story was cute and had me laughing out loud in certain parts. Great job.
MoonStarDutchess chapter 10 . 5/5/2007
This is great and funny!
MoonStarDutchess chapter 9 . 5/5/2007
“I-I can’t do it! I can’t... Why do I have to? Oh, God this is punishment for all the bad things that I’ve done! Please, I’ll stop being a gay just tell me this isn’t real!” Haru crazily shouted.

LMAO! I love this chapter especially what's quoted above.
MoonStarDutchess chapter 6 . 5/5/2007
This chapter was great. It wasn't horrible. (lol)
MoonStarDutchess chapter 5 . 5/5/2007
Good Job!
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