Reviews for Your Dream Girl!
Shikamaru's-sweetheart94 chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Annabelinda Tsuki chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
Ok, some of your sentences were hard to read, they just didn't flow right. You had words were they weren't supposed to be, and it was a bit confusing, but other than that, it was pretty good.

Congratulations on a one-shot well done.
Carlalalita chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. The build up was sly and awesome at the same time. Had no clue they were on a date.

Nice job!
3Cheersfor5Years chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
lol that funny and cute
TheAntelopicNatureGirl.Says U chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
aw. please continue!

make it a not oneshot!

wait... did that even make sense?


put another chapter up!


i said please.
Miyukii-San chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
LOVE IT! making Temari the sly type awesome! keep writing ShikaTema stories
Khaos-chan chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
lol! My favorite character in this story is...THE NAMELESS WAITER! xD Nice story
SoundsRight chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
extra-victory chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
SDF Macross chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
Nice! I love Shikamaru and Temari almost as much as I like Naruto and Hinata! Keep it up!
pheipl chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
I agree with Crystal Jaganshi, best pick up line ever ! Gotta remember that one :D
kira-chan05 chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
Helo there! I like this fic not becuase it is a shikamarutemari fandom but because of the simplicity of words you used and the sweet scenerios you have thoguht of. I hope to read more from you :)
Crystal Jaganshi chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
“Well the reason I’d blow her off is because I’m already out with someone who’s better then any dream.”

That was the best pickup line ever. Ever.
almostinsane chapter 2 . 4/9/2007
Great story! I hope to read more! God bless
sarsaparillia chapter 2 . 4/9/2007
aweseom! ha! i luv naruhina!
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