Reviews for Goodbye My Loves
fujikawaii10346 chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Peppermint Kiss chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
*lip trembles*


No, I'm not bashing you. It was very well-written - i could feel the sad vibes from sanada just in the letter, and renji's emotions...sad!
Apple Snapple chapter 1 . 8/3/2007


T.T You've made me angsty again...

Now I'm off to write some humour xD And then read some humour...
aksjskdjhsajs chapter 1 . 4/14/2007

Gen-kun's dead.

Inner Voice: Yes, he's dead. he's also not real.

...But he's dead. Oh cruel worrld!

...Anyway, I think this fic dropped out of heaven in answer to my prayers. I don't suppose you would mind if I sent you a fic, so you could beta it and let me know if I should post it? I have a small D1 well as the inability to make Yukimura choose between Gen-kun and Kaya-chan. And I made Yanagi a stalker...



Inner Voice: Yes, not shut up.

He's...I wonder, did he go to heaven?

Ah, the questions that plague me in the night...
Tora Macaw chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
Waa! Poor Sanada! Sorry about the late review, I went away for easter. Good bit of sorrow, well written. But...Sanada...Wa!
T chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
Hm... I have to say that this is the worst Angst/Tragedy story I've ever read...

Just to give you a few pointers:

One, at least try to make the story a little more descriptive.

Two, please don't end a letter with 'Goodbye my loves' it is completly corny and uneffective.

Three, in your A/N, do not order your readers to read. Obviously they wouldn't be called readers if they didn't read and I really don't appreciate being ordered around.

Four, please, flush this shit down the toilet.
ImmortalTigeress chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
OMG that's so sad! A short tragedy... nice work!
Kawaii-Gaara-Chan chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
Aw, Incredibly well written. I swear I cried buckets of tears. Poor Sanada! *cries* I'm sure you got Sanada's perspectives right of Akaya and Seiichi.
GSandM chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Old Fiat chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
::cries:: So sad! I think he should've just run off, not commited suicide. Then Yukimura could've had a good talk with him and Sanada could fall in love with... I dunno... I love idea of SanadaAtobe...

But whatever. Good job!

-Old Fiat
Ahotep chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Oh my God... I knew you were going to kill him but I didn't expect it to be a suicide. The jumping surprised me a little but it's less messy than cutting himself with his swords.

It was so sad but I liked it. Why can't he be happy? *tries to find a plot which won't end up with a dying Sanada*

Well I hope to read more from you soon...
Sheik's Lonely chapter 1 . 4/5/2007

Rikkai is really close. I think they'd all keep in contact even after school and college and just be a part of each others' lives. So this story sort of shows how they keep in contact.

...Okay, you never mentioned a time period for which this took place so I'll fangirl as I please, thank ya very much.
Alizel chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
-sniff- UNNYAA! You made me almost cry! You-you-you-! -cries- Sanada! -faints- Great job though. Angst and tension is good. Very good. But-but-but- Sanada!