Reviews for His Long Lost Sister
LeTac0 chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
Well your story seems wonderful so far.. I have actually skipped ahead just to see who she would take an interest in.. Though it seems the story hasn't been updated for quite a while. . I was wondering, is this incest having to do that she was is the sister and sesshomaru looks at her a certain way? As I said I hadn't begun reading it but I do hope so I was looking for such a story and I hope you do continue unward. Well thankyou
louise chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
i was like singing this [whats happiing now what am i soppose to do i dont really now i just want to read somemore what about now what about today will i every live it down more than i was ment to be what about nowwwwwwww more them me i dont know what to do i just want to what about now i will never live it down i want to cry outloud but i can never do that so what about now what about today what if i take the world on more than i was ment to be]um i love the story but could u rite more cause theres only two oh and heres my other song[boom boom clap boom dee clap dee clap boom boom clap boom dee clap dee clap one two three for tell me what to dis this is something u should do poper locker pocker doter country flip put u arms to the side side to side jump to the left stick it glide zig zag cross the floor shuffle in die aginor when harms spilt boy on ur hips one four eighty eighty twists a boom boom clap boom dee clap dee clap boom boom clap boom dee clap dee clap]i hope u liked my two songs wanna here another one ok[seating in the car in my taxi cab listineing to the radio my tummy turning and im feeling kinda home sick to much presure and im neverous but when the taxi man put on the radio and the jay z song was on and the jaz song was on so i put my hands up to playing my song now im going to be ok nodding my head like yah moving my hips like yah so i put my hands up to playing my song and the butterflys fly a way nodding my head like yah moving hips like yah ]i hope u like them. but they all connect to what im feeling the first song was i was feeling what am i suppose to do cause it ended so quick and the secong song i was so excited cause i taught off course ur going to write more arent yah and in the third song im feeling i dont know but i should definality keep my head up sorry mine isint that long but ur a grown up are u freak i thought u where like 13 u really shoudent be writing storys llike inuyasha but csi sure but serouisly
louise chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
i love the story but could u make inu and the gang in on it a little more cause well umm i dont know i think its cause i love inu like love love him