|Reviews for Reality of Time|
| Kishoto chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
just a test review,although good job myself ;)
| MOVEDTODA- Sono KOJ Manymasks chapter 9 . 8/3/2007
Once again that was different. I love the origionality you put into this story. Yet another all around good chapter.
p.s. I was wondering, could you check out my fic I posted a while ago you should find it easily. Do it at your convinance.
| FlamingWings chapter 9 . 8/2/2007
Hmm interesting. Quite good though. Can you post the site where you can find that manga?
| FlamingWings chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
We need something like this for twilight princess.
| Cimar of Turalis chapter 2 . 8/2/2007
I read the bottom of chapter two and saw how your story had 17 hits and 0 reviews. Dont worry too much about that. My own story has 579 hits and 1 review. Just keep writing your story and write what you want to write and the reviews will come.
| Micromyni chapter 9 . 8/2/2007
i hope that they can save Volvagia/Orian. especially now that he can talk. :)
| MOVEDTODA- Sono KOJ Manymasks chapter 8 . 7/21/2007
Yay another chapter. :D
Though there's no action it's still an all around good chapter.
Rescued by lizfoes... well that sucks for the heroes
| MOVEDTODA- Sono KOJ Manymasks chapter 7 . 7/5/2007
Heh heh heh... I'm pretty sure I know who it is...
Anyways good chapter as always. That's cool how you are taking parts of the manga and adding it to the mix. I wonder how Volgavia (Orian) will play into this?
| The Broken Habit chapter 6 . 6/21/2007
A great take on the Zelda universe. Please update!
| ZombieDragon chapter 6 . 6/4/2007
well, the story is good...but don't give up! I know it's hard to not give up (i'm just about to dump SotP (Secrets of the Past) cause that story is really hard to write!) But just don't give up, take a break for a little bit...
I know not getting reviews is frusterating, but don't let that get to you. If you like writing this story, continue it until you get in a snag like me and then sk for suggestions or something...
| MOVEDTODA- Sono KOJ Manymasks chapter 6 . 6/4/2007
Aww man and I really did get excited too.
| MOVEDTODA- Sono KOJ Manymasks chapter 5 . 5/12/2007
Well that was cerntainly different! I didn't see that coming. See you got this.
The only problem I have is little things like the Deku Tree nodding or shaking his head, which as far as I know he can't do. It doesn't destroy the story or anything but still it doesn't hurt to watch for those kinds of things.
Overall another good chapter. I can't wait to see what else you do with it.
| MOVEDTODA- Sono KOJ Manymasks chapter 4 . 5/3/2007
What can I say, keep doing what your doing and the story will just fine (or better)!
| Azulcat chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
okay, i agree with evil riggs, but i cant put it into such great context as he did. This has potential, but the thing is is that its something almost all of us have seen before, so you DEFINETELY want to have some major plot twist or several minor plot twists.
also, it seems to be moving a bit too fast. a story that has several chapters of forshadowing and no plot is a pain, but a story that starts right off the bat, with no intro or anything, can be worse. CAN be. keep working on this, but dont move so fast, kay?
| MOVEDTODA- Sono KOJ Manymasks chapter 3 . 4/26/2007
Well... that was well thought out. Evil Riggs is right though you work under two serious handicaps, 1. It's a self insertion 2. It's basically (not completely now that I read chpt. 3) a retelling. That might explain lack of reviews.
But don't be discouraged all you gotta do is stand out like Evil Riggs said in my opinion you are well underway with that so keep up the good work.
Heh heh heh I knew it...