Reviews for The Killer in You
NorthernMage chapter 13 . 4/15/2015
I haven't read Ver. A yet, but B seems pretty hard to beat...guess I'll see!

There were so many times where I thought this was going to end in a Kira victory, and L would be stuck in that situation with Light, every night...

It wasn't looking good.

Which makes the ending all the better, as nothing like that happened!
Crazy reviewer chapter 13 . 5/16/2014
The alternative one was better..and as a matter of fact,,, L DOES NOT have the mentality of a servant..
blurryfaceimagines chapter 2 . 3/23/2014'm supposed to skip to chapter 7 and read till the end before I read chapters 3 to 6?
blurryfaceimagines chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Awwnhh! Adorablleeee!...Who decided to be uke? L? Anyway. The ending was so sad, I got teary eyed!
ochaofice chapter 13 . 9/7/2013
best story ever! I loved it and I wish the second one was what really happened! your writing style is perfect for death note!
kim chapter 11 . 8/11/2013
Double meanings?
kim chapter 6 . 8/9/2013
I love this version so much! So sweet, beautiful, and believable.
bakonet chapter 13 . 6/2/2013
I've always wanted to review seperately on the two versions of this masterpiece,but since I suck at review,then I'll make it short in one.I dare say that IS one of the most effing awesome mindfucking in-character whatever-it-is i've ever read in my whole fangirl life GODDAMN the A ver makes you go ''awwwwww'' and I'm such a sweet tooth,*wipe tears*,the B ver is even more I can't really imagine Light to be the type to give up his own idealism just for views himself as a sacrifice for a better world,right?But the most perfect thing is,you manage to come up with a way to save both of their lives *hohohoho* while on the other hand capture their characters so suprisingly give us an specific insight into their mind and make the flow of the story very are still plotting against each other but there is a side of feeling in their mind (which does not affect and contort their idealism after all) and that is sooooo in-character and sooooooooo sweet *sob loudly*
ukegilgamesh chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
Neloska chapter 13 . 12/17/2012
Really loved this story. I think this was the first time I read a death note fic where Light and L plot against each other and their plans are actually realistic, intelligent and amazing. Also totally in character in my opinion, with the exception of the first chapter and how quick they got together. But I get it that the important part in the story was about how Light would really react if he suddenly couldn't kill L anymore. Love the idea of blackmail and think it totally fitting. Wish you had written more DN ffs...and btw I preferred the Version B, I can't imagine Light sitting around doing nothing instead of finding a solution
Sonorous Serendipity chapter 13 . 4/28/2012
That was just.. great. Now, comments! :) The first version was really quite fluffy and great for fangirls.. like me. . But the second version [as much as I hate to admit it], is more realistic. Kira-Light is a sadistic bastard, and that'd never change. I kind of wished that Light just admitted he was Kira and stuff to his father directly.. still bitter that Soichiro stayed in the dark even at his end. D: Anyway, added to my favorites. :D
narutoluvr4evr chapter 12 . 7/1/2011
Beautiful beyond words. I loved both versions.
rainbowMonstrosity chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
this story should be rated m, but its really good! captivating!
Naire chapter 13 . 5/16/2011
Haha, właśnie się zorientowałam, że jesteś z Polski :D Więc mogłam napisać ci komentarz po polsku a nie męczyć się z ingliszem ;) Tak czy owak, świetne opowiadanie :D
Naire chapter 13 . 5/16/2011
It was a great story! I loved both endings. Well, maybe the first one was a bit better. I've been looking for a fic like this for a while now. I'm glad I found yours. Your writing is awesome, characters were acting naturally - in some stories it feels like every dialogue is forced or something.

Well, I enjoyed it very much and I hope you'll keep writing :D Looking forward to yours stories.
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