Reviews for Breaking
intensewhatever chapter 8 . 12/15/2008
You could have made the ending longer, but I like it just the way it is. It's funny and cute. Great job! I really liked the story even though it's only Twilight from Edward's PoV.
intensewhatever chapter 7 . 12/15/2008
Right now, I don't have time to read the next chapter, but so far, I love it! It's great!
emptyaccount00000000 chapter 8 . 6/14/2008
I like it. I really can't wait for Midnight Sun!
paws93 chapter 8 . 5/18/2008
great story
Will-You-Be-Mine-Forever chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
this is AMAZING

i love it!

keep up the good work!

update soon
AKL0059 chapter 8 . 3/31/2008
I loved it!

omg.adriana chapter 8 . 2/15/2008
Omgsh. I LOVE this story! Please expand on the ending? Pretty please with an Edward on top? Haha. :]
omg.adriana chapter 2 . 2/15/2008
BLACKIE! Hahahah! That was the "name" of the bag, right?
omg.adriana chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Wonderful first chapter! :] I liked it. :]
TwilightMoonEclipse chapter 2 . 1/16/2008
I like it
Cherry Blossom Angel 18 chapter 8 . 12/27/2007
AW i love this book and i think that maybe you should send this to Stephanie Meyer as an idea for Edward's POV for this part of the story.
twilightjunkie77 chapter 8 . 11/23/2007
so good!

keep writing im putting you on my fav authors list cuz man u totally r!

thanx 4 taking the time to do this stuff cuz it makes my day so much better to be ablr to read it untill the next book comes out!
SomethingCuteandCreative chapter 8 . 8/27/2007
really good story!
Zaiaku Dyuu chapter 4 . 8/25/2007
Er, hi, I think that you have good writing skills yay! Sorry I didn't know what else to say! (:3)

~Manga Dyuu
jessica w chapter 2 . 7/8/2007
what is:





and so far so good.
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