Reviews for Haruno Happiness
Angelina chapter 11 . 12/28/2013
like always very nice
Angelina chapter 9 . 12/28/2013
um i would have liked it more if you made them go on the roller , maybe next time i liked it sakura-chan55.
Angelina chapter 5 . 12/28/2013
well yes too much indeed
Angelina chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
nice story sakura-chan55
xFlipJamsx chapter 12 . 11/26/2013
please update the story !
MusicAngel13 chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Epic
StrawberryxChocolate chapter 12 . 5/9/2013
Love this fic W
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 12 . 10/25/2011
Pretty awesome story, why arnt u updating
Loveydove chapter 2 . 7/9/2011
What is Taro? next when will you update again? I like this story!
Dissonantia chapter 12 . 8/29/2010
Awww! So kawaii!
xXPOPPXx chapter 2 . 9/12/2009
i say its gweat!
xXPOPPXx chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
hahaha love Tenten's last name. (not sarcasm)

like story so far! YEA!
Just Lovely chapter 12 . 8/11/2009
Wonderful!

It's so cute, everything is so cute and funny in this story.

I really liked that last scene, with Sakura and Sasuke, they're so cute.
iSasuSaku chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
yay naomi is my best friend . yes she is japanese oh love the story keep it up
XxSCENEandHEARDxX chapter 12 . 1/14/2009
I agree w/ you I don't like flames either, and do accept constructive criticism as well. So here's mine for you: Though your story is quite good, to me it seems kind of jumpy. It jumps from one thing to another. In my opinion, you need to put more detail in the story. For example: the last scene in the story w/ Sakura and Sasuke. In that first paragraph I'd put more detail(like how did she fall into the water? What did she look like when Sasuke helped her? There's more but I'm trying not too give to much away _) This way you're showing the story more instead of just telling the story. Other than that, it's great! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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