|Reviews for Forgiveness|
| sakuzi-chan chapter 10 . 7/7
Been many years since you published but just end to say this is an excellent fic! Great characterisation and angst.
| Steel Heart Alchemist chapter 11 . 5/21
YOU MUST MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS PIECE OF AWESOMENESS! SOOOO EMOTIONAL! PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/9
Man, this was good. It was heartbreaking and harrowing at times, but so good. I absolutely love your style, you always write the characters perfectly. The emotional intensity of this (and your other fics) is astounding.
| SakuraWindChime chapter 11 . 4/1
This was so well written for events that were so difficult. I like inflicting pain on my characters, however horrible that sounds, but I don't think I could execute the events you did without such mastery - fabulous job!
| LeChick chapter 7 . 2/14
I'm crying again.
| LeChick chapter 5 . 2/14
God that scene with Ed and Mustang was just heart wrenching
| LeChick chapter 3 . 2/13
This chapter made me cry.
| Sherlock's Pipe And Hat chapter 7 . 8/4/2015
Okay...I rarely cry over reading. But this...I was tearing up. Seriously. Feels...
| circumstancesRirrelevant15 chapter 11 . 6/10/2015
My gosh, heart-wrenchingly amazing! This was so well written and riveting that I stayed up most of the night reading this (idk when I started but I just finished it and it's just now 4:59 am XD ). I have no regrets whatsoever for forsaking my sleep to read this. Absolutely loved it!
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 11 . 3/13/2015
ahhh! This was a neat story. I thought, "...WHOOOAH" when that happened in that Ishballan town... O.o
Well, he's getting help. He seems like he'll get better. Dang... *sigh*
| BleedingCoffee chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
| Natade13 chapter 6 . 12/1/2014
You are too good at writing nightmares.
Nightmares are hard, but I think that scene could've easily been canon for poor Mustang.
(I think your stories, your amazingly gory and depressing stories, are all I've been reading the past few days.)
| waddiwasiwitch chapter 11 . 10/11/2014
Wonderful story - darkly disturbing and lovely examination of Mustang's relationship with the Elrics.
| TheColdfireAlchemist chapter 11 . 5/10/2014
Wonderful story, thank you for sharing it!
| TheColdfireAlchemist chapter 10 . 5/10/2014
Oh man, this is an angsty story, I love it!