|Reviews for Forgiveness|
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 11 . 3/13
ahhh! This was a neat story. I thought, "...WHOOOAH" when that happened in that Ishballan town... O.o
Well, he's getting help. He seems like he'll get better. Dang... *sigh*
| BleedingCoffee chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
| Natade13 chapter 6 . 12/1/2014
You are too good at writing nightmares.
Nightmares are hard, but I think that scene could've easily been canon for poor Mustang.
(I think your stories, your amazingly gory and depressing stories, are all I've been reading the past few days.)
| waddiwasiwitch chapter 11 . 10/11/2014
Wonderful story - darkly disturbing and lovely examination of Mustang's relationship with the Elrics.
| TheColdfireAlchemist chapter 11 . 5/10/2014
Wonderful story, thank you for sharing it!
| TheColdfireAlchemist chapter 10 . 5/10/2014
Oh man, this is an angsty story, I love it!
| TheColdfireAlchemist chapter 9 . 5/10/2014
Wow, what a chapter! Even though Mustang killed Winry's parents, I still want to give him a hug. Anyway, sorry for not commenting on some of the earlier chapters, I was too engrossed in the story :)
| TheColdfireAlchemist chapter 8 . 5/10/2014
This isn't weak at all! It's really good, I love your writing! It's very descriptive.
| CHiKa-RoXy chapter 11 . 2/6/2014
Jesus. Crust. You really do know how to play with a reader's emotions.
| CHiKa-RoXy chapter 7 . 2/6/2014
I really do love it when writers write Prental Roy/Ed fluff, it's great! I cried too, just so you know. Ed and Roy should hug more often... then again it woukd ruin Roy's imagine of the "Manipulative Bastard" that Ed says he is.
| Clams-and-Rainbows chapter 11 . 1/5/2014
| Elvenlaughter chapter 11 . 11/1/2013
This is such a heartwrenchingly beautiful story, and I can't believe it took me so long to read it, when I'm such a fan of your other stuff. LOVE it. You are a master, and you just keep stunning me with your incredible skill and talent. Srsly.
| royriza4ever chapter 11 . 8/19/2013
Once again, a perfect ending yo a perfect story. You are amazing, and now are one of my favorite authors on fanfiction. I think I've read all your stories now, so hurry up and start a new one :). You officially have a fan. Yay!
| xXFantasyVSRealityxX chapter 11 . 8/6/2013
Great ending! Loved the story! I look forward to reading more from you.
| xXFantasyVSRealityxX chapter 10 . 8/6/2013
Aww! Mustang and Ed playing catch like father and son! That was really sweet.