Reviews for Rocky and Adrian
Jan Lee chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
This is a lovely poem. Loved how you compared/juxtaposed Paulie's view with both Rocky and Adrian's. I also like that you mention them as an eternal couple, ranking up there with Cleopatra and Marc Antony, or even Romeo and Juliet. Their love is truly endless, like these couples. However, I disagree (amicably) with your line:

But now he was known as the man that never got over the death of his wife.

I don't think he was widely recognized for that: If anything, he was recognized as a popular, older boxer with a quaint restaurant. That aside, I think this is really beautiful. Good work.