|Reviews for A Change in the Stars|
| MellaK chapter 26 . 10/24/2013
| thejadegecko chapter 26 . 5/20/2013
Other than a few issues with dragon egg timing - and having her listen to people's thoughts/talk to people thru their dragon (I thought was weird - lol) - I thought it was a nice story. Good Job! I can't wait to continue on to your sequel!
| bearblue chapter 26 . 12/31/2012
Very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing this.
| Spaidorade chapter 26 . 6/28/2012
Love this story! I hope you keep writing. Your writing style is publish-worthy and your characters are addicting! Keep it up :)
| Spaidorade chapter 23 . 6/28/2012
I'm curious how there was a Queens Wing for Linnara to attempt suicide in if hers was the only queen at Benden?
| Spaidorade chapter 20 . 6/27/2012
The only way to make him stop is to eat him... lmao LOVE IT!
| Mia chapter 8 . 11/27/2011
I enjoy the story so far, but like others have mentioned before, there are some things that irk me.
The -th ending of human names and the name of the queen that is the same of Moreta's queen are 2 that irk me because of cannon.
But this last chapter, I didn't find believable, unfortunately (and a bit from chapter 7... "Control them"?).
To expect the youngsters to go into full action at the state they are in, "just" because the weyrleader is incapacitated, is something I don't believe would happen.
In an organisation as old as the weyr, there would be a backup inplace incase of an event like this. In all the turns of pern, it would not be the first, nor the last time a weyrleader would become sick, or even die, and they would still be able to fight threat, WITHOUT throwing away dusins of dragons.
Also the amount of weyrlings you kill off in this chapter is excessive...
But that being said... I will continue to read it (it helps that it is completed at this time :P )
I just hope that this was the "worst" part of the story
| wendums chapter 26 . 11/1/2011
Beautiful story. Just a little query! I thought dragons carried eggs for 12 sevendays befor laying, then it takes 3-4 sevendays to harden and hatch. Just a thought. Going to look for a sequel now. High hopes. Thankyou
| wendums chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
It may be a while since youwrote this but I am enjoying allready.
| hisluv chapter 26 . 10/20/2011
Just to say I loved this fic. Read just like one of Anne/todd's books barring the confusing dates. I will be recommending this fic to others. Thank you for writing it.
| Kitiara Woodbane chapter 26 . 5/7/2011
I really enjoyed this story, it was a really interesting way to portray greens. Right at the beginning, you wrote that the bronze dragon was turned away from her. Is there any chance you could write a story where she did Impress the bronze? It would be interesting to see the reactions.
| kipannia chapter 26 . 3/4/2011
Great story. Loved the characters and the plot flowed beautifully. I have been a fan of the Pern world for many years (especially the earlier novels) and enjoyed this story as much as I have Anne's works.
| curlygirly chapter 14 . 2/2/2011
good action. And i am not 'angrier' at you.
| curlygirly chapter 11 . 2/2/2011
OMG! How could you do that? I LOVE Arryn.
| australis-angel chapter 26 . 5/13/2010
Great story, really sucked me in :D Can't wait to read more!
There were a few name mistakes, mostly M'ran's 'Orlith', LOL but that hasn't detracted from the story. Well done!