|Reviews for His Motivation|
| noreenklose chapter 1 . 12/5/2016
All told, a VERY good story.
Thanks for writing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2016
Don't really hate ginny so much as I find it strange that harry starts liking her out of nowhere and rather quickly becomes almost obsessive in parts of the book, this without any show buildup in between makes me think of more of the darker side of things. I'm sorry I don't have an account at this time for you to respond to, but maybe this info will help.
| N Flamel chapter 1 . 10/26/2016
Just finished Ch 18 of Elemental and wanted more kb, so I found this story, confirmed I'd not read it before and eliminated that condition. This is a very different way to show what true love is. While Ginny was a little too perfect, it's understandable in a one shot. My feeling is that the reader can fill in the negative scenes that you chose to leave out. What's left is an awe-inspiring story of a young woman's faith in herself, her love for someone, and the value she can bring to his recovery. While some of Harry's qualities, traits and abilities are missing, he has many memories and actions that show how much he is loved, since Ginny, especially, Ron and Hermione all paused their lives to help him. Plus, all of the negative crap Dumbledore and Voldemort did to him, along with the aforementioned Dursley experiences, are no longer part of this Harry. I think that's an excellent trade off. Lastly, you created a tone or feeling in your this short story that was consistent throughout and appropriate, since the outcome wasn't expected, but could be even better than what your readers had hoped for. Excellent job, Kev. - Nicolas
| Neo-Devil chapter 1 . 6/1/2015
there are crossover stories that just don't exist yet, crossover ideas that have yet to be implemented, like say a true, honest to god Megaman-Inuyasha fic, one in which one of the megamen go into the inuyasha time period, and help out legitly in the story, or how bout a megaman legends crossed over with something? the only legends crossover I have seen is one dealing with Naruto, so yeah, we need more out there.
| nayin17 chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
Thank you for writing a strong and well match Ginny for Harry
| aheartofwords chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
This is a different type of story for sure, especially with the 'harry is permanently hurt/changed' ending but it's a breath of fresh air, not predictable. It was a nice read. Love H&G as usual! You always write them so well!
| Tomon chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
This is really something new. Not really 100% okay but alive and kicking. And with a wife that love him above all else :) That's not such a bad life. Nice story
| Nytefyre chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
You like writing a strong Ginny which is fun to read, and makes much more sense for a match with Harry. Harry's damage and the solution is definitely innovative - though I'm surprised that he integrated the separate memories/personalities without more side effects...
Thanks for posting.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
This is a really good story. A real good example of real life trama and a fight back to living again. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of your stories. pms
| Aalens chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
It is good to read a fic that develops Ginny's character so well, so satisfyingly, as you have here. Thank you, this was a most enjoyable story.
| Ibskib chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
I think this happy ending is true in a way we don't often see, and often authors write as if magic can fix everything. Canon Moody shows us that fallacy, and a recovery from a headinjury that's realistic in it's own way, is an interesting read.
| Karou WindStalker chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Very original story!
Very well thought out too!
I like the therapy that finally seemed to 'work'.
| BrightMikal chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
I really liked the unique (well, I still haven't seen one similar) ending to this fic.
Ginny's character is a little Mary-Sue ~ ish. Willing to spend so much time with Harry, and to try to heal him. I think it's more the fact it's a oneshot, if you expanded it you'd have time to detail times when Ginny struggled with the burden or crying it out.
Don't get me wrong, her character is very strong, and great, (Her verbal sparring with Molly was delightful), just a little unrealistic.
I liked the thin plot line, being mostly a prelude to the ending. It could be more emotional, especially with the Quartet reliving a lot of past memories, and watching as Harry gradually recovered.
One thing I felt was very in-character was the whole hospital bit, and Ginny not leaving his side. It's something I think she would do, especially with the threat of Voldemort gone. The fact that they're still alive, defeaters of Voldemort, would want Ginny to constantly reassure herself it wasn't a dream.
It's a very thoughtful oneshot, and very well written.
Great Work! :)
| SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
| fred2008 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
wow, keep up the work.