|Reviews for Fear|
| MrsPeelWe'reNeeded chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
A great story. Very funny.
| Sapphyre Blu chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
hehehehe-Oh you got me. I didn't see that one coming-hehehehe good job :):):)
| NotARedhead chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
Very cute little premise, but you need to work on character voices. Tony and Kate don't sound natural. You've written Kate as though she's talking like Ziva, sort of, and Tony's language - even his thoughts - are too formal. But it did make me laugh. I thought, "Oh ... here's another angst fic about Tony be captured," and it turned out all it was was the elevator. Hee!