|Reviews for Acceptance|
| CardboardCreative chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
“Trying to cut off my circulation, are you?”
Oh, the evil little thing. What a scheme, cutting off circulation. The most devious plan of destruction to exist. Possibly becoming Elphaba's arch-nemesis in the process with that one.
This was a really good study. You didn't doddle with useless thoughts or musings, and you writing acomodated Elphaba's personality in the scene nicely. You sort of cleared up the questions of Liir's maternity, surrounding Elphaba's feeling for him, although she seemed to grow colder as he aged.
Little moments such as the one you portrayed can either have extreme importence and depth to the character or none what so ever. I personally take this as the first choice, with slight modifications. A moment, indeed.
I also like how Fiyero seems to be tied in with everything Elphaba does after he dies.
Goodness gracious, you rock!
| LeiaSedai and Umi-Chan chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
Good Story! The character of Elphaba-her bitterness, her sense of loss- was spot on. Her relationship with Liir is perfectly defined. Write On!