Reviews for Hottie's Home
slytherensangel26 chapter 8 . 5/22/2009
no! you can't just leave it like this! you have got to update and soon!
KP's Man chapter 8 . 3/13/2009
This story is hilarious!I need more!
ErnestTheGuy chapter 8 . 10/22/2008
o man i am loving this stuff. you gotta keep this stuff up.
LoPe21 chapter 8 . 10/1/2008
i know its been a while but please finish this story. its absolutely hilarious. kim stuttering and zoning out is classic.
Sentinel103 chapter 8 . 8/2/2008
Spectre, another great tale of Kim going nutso about clueless Ron. Well the pearls were a nice touch though, Yori must have given Ron the idea. So, Ron's not the first buffoon in space...yet. Though with the last stunt Kim might launch him herself. I think they'd better get some alone time, with the seventh armoured cav providing security to keep Bonnie away.


Johnny Eagle chapter 2 . 6/2/2008
bigherb81 chapter 8 . 3/29/2008
Just seems that nothing can go right for Ron even when getting rescued he seems to be upsetting his girlfriend. Can't wait to see how this one works it's self out.
CMY chapter 8 . 3/25/2008
Heheheheheheh...aww, man, I'm loving this fanfic more and more...

“Ron's not coming over,” She wailed, “Daddy sent him into space.”

Ohh, how I laughed when I read's like she's eleven again...

Frederick! What the heck!

I just LOVED that scene where Monique just pushed Kim's head back into the pillow. So typical Monique...

And now it looks like it's time for the Nique-ster to use her fashion skills to help her novice teen heroine...

Leave it to Monique to mention Yori in order to get Kim 'prepped up'...

Wait, what did she mean by rocking someone's worl-


Talk about scheming...

Let's hope Kim dosen't hear what Monique said...if a girl asks you which you like more, food or her, NEVER say food. EVER...

Rockets are go? The boys?

...ohh, noo...

...Uh...Oh...This is not good, this is not good, this is not good, this is. NOT. GOOD...

Ohh, Great! Just Great! Now he's hypnotised by her...erm...her, urm...never mind, you know what I mean. Even with all his loyalty and all that, that guy's still a guy. But how in the name of all that is holy(and unholy) does Ron keep getting himself into these messes!

First the stewardess, then Yori, now this. Man, if this keeps up, Kim's gonna STRANGLE Ron to death...

And as if THAT wasn't enough, it looks like Bonnie, her posse/drones and Tara have their own plans for the Ronster... never let up, do you, spec? Never...poor, poor Ron...what did he EVER do to you?

I don't even have to say that I'll be anticipating the next chapter with bated breath, spectre. You know me by now. 10-Q very much for this horrifying chapter(semi-sarcasm there. Not sure if I mean it or not now. Oh, geez, now you're confusing me with my reviews now. DANG YOU!)

Post the next one soon, man, 'cos we readers all just can't wait...

From CMY, a now-very-anxious long-winded guy.

P.S. I hope Monique wins the Best Minor Character Award, spec. Good luck, man...
Nftnat chapter 8 . 3/24/2008
The boy is in trouble? CB, it was the SBF who did the FT on the BFBF, and just got on the receiving end of a growl in her name from one GEM.

Oh, that was flying tackle and green-eyed monster. Note to self: in enrolling for online classes at Middleton COmmunity College, include a course in Monique-speak.

If Kim would allow herself to think clearly for a second - and I realize that ain't happenin' in this sitch - she might wonder why Monique got her ready to knock Ron's socks off if she was going to make a play for him herself.

Well, at least Kim knows that Ron is still on planet Earth, which could only mean that whatever went on with him and Yori - and him and Kim, for the moment - is innocuous enough to pass muster with Mr. Dr. P.

Let's hope for her sake that Monique is better at explaining herself than Ron is at explaining himself. She might enjoy the guessing games that leave Kim out of sorts to a fault, but it's different when her own tail is on the line, and it so is.

S-Triple-Six, can't wait for Chapter 9.
Solarstone chapter 8 . 3/23/2008
"natural accouterments"- heh heh, is that even a word? Enjoyable chapter, as always but too short to be nothing more than a teaser. Update!
CajunBear73 chapter 8 . 3/21/2008
That boy is in serious trouble... LOL!

warprince2000 chapter 8 . 3/21/2008
That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)
spedclass chapter 8 . 3/21/2008
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
Kwebs chapter 8 . 3/20/2008
Nice chapter, Ron can't catch a break. Update soon.
Drakonis Aurous chapter 8 . 3/20/2008
Great chapter! Very well written. I do like your portrayals of Mrs. Dr. P., Mr. Dr. P., and Monique - in addition to Kim and Ron of course.

Anne and Monique are having fun with the running joke at Kim's expense. But even after the joke has run its course, Ron gets into more "trouble". AND we still don't know what exactly happened between Ron and Yori during his training.

Definitely awaiting the next chapter

- Drakonis Aurous
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