Reviews for The Melody of the Fox |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 10 years since the last update and this story coming to an "end". Where does the time go. This is still a good read and one of my favorite pairings. It's sad we'll never see the story through to it's end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I swear to god if this hurts me emotionally after reding it like Illegitimate Love did i dont know... i just know it's going to suck |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this has been so far the best NaruXTayu fanfic I've come acrossed. You may not have finished it but at least this can give ideas for writers who'd want to finish it |
![]() ![]() Other than it being annoying hearing how much if a idiot naruto is every other paragraph I'm enjoying this story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() What does giving Tayuya a family name a accomplish? |
![]() ![]() You know this story is really great in most parts so far. I know it gets dropped before it finishes by the length and where the story is so far, but the pacing isn’t that bad. You built up characters and you made interactions believable and didn’t have tayuya just fall in love after a day or something. The only complaint I have so far isn’t really with your story, but with Naruto. I think I finally understand why he didn’t learn shit when he trained with Jiraiya in cannon. He’s so damn insufferable and unless you break it down in simple terms if it’s not flashy he doesn’t want to learn. He’s a fucking ninja they aren’t supposed to be flashy and I get no one ever bothered to teach him, but his attitude and pride(how the hell can you want help, but not want people to know you want help) from being mistreated has a lot to do with it. However that doesn’t excuse him from ignoring a Jiraiya and in this story anko who are clearly stronger than him because he doesn’t want to admit he needs more help. And I just went on a rant about a fictional character… I will see myself out now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Altering Tayuya's appearance is disrespectful. |
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![]() ![]() Wish there was more to read tbh was enjoying this |
![]() ![]() ![]() im so mad the story basically "ended" with them not being together and still making up; why u gotta do us like that bro... also i knew the alliance was coming. you totally got that from killer bees infinite tsukoyomi huh B) anyway pls fix it next chapter (if there ever is one) so if you dont update again it atleast ends with something wholesome ;-; |
![]() ![]() in the end (who are we kidding this story is in hiatus hell) I'm actually quite happy that i did read it the romance was quite wholesome and a decent alternative pairing is always worth a read (sry canon pairing fans but yours is easier so the bar is a bit higher) |
![]() ![]() came here because of the glowing reputation your fanboys are giving you and all was ok until i hit chapter 21... you didnt bother redefining it so the reader can only default to canon and your root anbu are just strange when compared to canon. you send a group of what seems to be at least tokubetsu jonin class anbu after a single juro or only that after jiraya... eitherway its miscalculated. your root anbu are seemingly missing a killswitch ("danzo", "root" and mission details are killswitches without prior permission) and their emotional conditioning seems to have malfunctioned. also a lot of individuality in a group that has been termed as danzos toy soldiers. when you stick to the canon like glue and then diverge for shit and giggles its just strange to read. i would suggest to either bother enough to redefine it or at the least leave a short "my root anbu wont be following the canon" at the beginning or the end of a chapter where its pertinent. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this fanfic and how you've written my favorite kunoichi Tayuya. To begin with, I like her brash and hardened personality, as well as her mistrust, the result of her experiences in the Sound Village, where her living conditions were harsh and brutalizing even by the low standards of the ninja child soldier world. (jeez poor girl). Her relationship with Naruto is very well built, at first she can't stand him, she insults him and hits him out of embarrassment for his stupidity (I Iove it when she questions his sexuality), but little by little she gets closer to him upon discovering his kind and honest nature. I like reading how she becomes a caring big sister to Naruto and teaches him, well... the basic ninja skills that apparently nobody bothered to teach the blond boy before. (yeah, i think that orange jumpsuit of his makes him look stupid too) I also enjoyed seeing her show off her skills in which she owns Naruto, her genjutsu, taijutsu, and chakra control. Jeez, this girl is badass. And also the other less competent and interesting kunoichis in the Leaf. I especially like how Tayuya owns Sakura, exposing her pathetic obsession with Sasuke and how she didn't bother to know any shit about Naruto and how later smacks the useless pink haired dipshit with her only good arm. Thanks to you Naruto ends up forgetting about this toxic bitch, that he was behind her like a lapdog calling her "Sakura chan" makes my stomach turn just remembering it. Seriously, what did you see in her? And Ino's gossipy character, considering flirting with Naruto, snooping around Naruto and Tayuya's relationship, as well as her maturity in telling Sakura to get over Sasuke. She's almost as shallow and annoying as Sakura, but definitely more confident and pretty. Having that girl in class, how does Naruto choose to fall in love with Sakura? Was he blind or something? Oh, and Hinata's insecurities and shyness are hilarious to read. How she examines her body in the mirror, how she stammers when she tries to talk to his love interest, as well as how angry and helpless she is when she sees how the blond boy is more interested in the foul mouthed girl who ends up roasting her like a chicken in front of her Na…na….na Naruto-kun is the best comedy i ever seen. God, I really hate her pathetic submissive love interest satellite character almost as much as Sakura's bitchness. Seeing her misery as she loses her only motivation and goal in her worthless existence is worth its weight in gold. |