Reviews for The Melody of the Fox
xNaruHina chapter 11 . 2/24/2016
This was a pretty great and unique story until this chapter. This, sadly might be as far as I can go though because you made Naruto into a pathetic pussy that begs and whines just because a girl is mad. I will give it a couple more chapters to see if he mans up or not..
KingZthe1st chapter 44 . 2/15/2016
I know I may not have reviewed as much in the past but I've been here since the time you started this endeavor and I'm proud to say that I read this story 3 separate times in full up this point that we're at now. Without a shred of doubt this is the greatest NarutoXTayuya fanfiction on this site and no one else even holds a candle. Your story sold me on the pairing and I wish the shit was canon but I digress, I'm glad to have been here through it all. My eyes are watering right now lol! All other fanfics will be compared to this one whether it be NxT, some other pairing, or a different fandom all together. I want to cry over this but alast farewell oh great creator of "The Melody of the Fox"!
KingZthe1st chapter 41 . 2/15/2016
Dammit Sai! Fucking up 36 chapters of hard work! Damn story tilted now! Still best NxT story ever
KingZthe1st chapter 11 . 2/7/2016
Lol reading this for the third time and I keep forgetting how funny it is. I died laughing when Ino started singing Wannabe!
Lovehates833 chapter 12 . 2/4/2016
I'm really enjoying the story so far, but the real life references (while not that many) are kind of off putting. I mean Tayuya just said she'd go super saiyan, how would she know what that meant? If and when you come back to this story, could you please edit that stuff out? Because again aside from that I've been enjoying this so far.
Squarekiddo chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
If you didnt mind making them OC, why not change that obnoxious Attitude of Narutos when you were at it :C

Sorry I just really dont like canon obnoxious Naruto
OriksGaming chapter 44 . 1/26/2016
Ah, so close to the end, and you abandoned it. I'm gonna go cry in a corner.
Moverman chapter 29 . 12/25/2015
Tony McNucklz chapter 22 . 12/3/2015
and yes it was sadistic. you clearly state that she is intentionally and knowingly cruel for her own amusement. that is called sadism.
Tony McNucklz chapter 22 . 12/3/2015
after all the sadistic crap anko pulled tayuya just opens up to her? the only character it would have made sense with was shizune since there was so little animosity there. but anko? the woman that's done nothing but belittle and torture her in every emotionally conceivable way? argh.
watermeloine chapter 44 . 11/27/2015
Don't you fucking tell me you quit this. This is the best story on the side period. It has the potential to become the most reviewed naruto story on the site.

Seriously, your writing is amazing. The character development and the relationship development is unparalleled by any other story, your always imchingnus closer to what we want without actually giving it which makes us crave for more everytime. I don't even like romance but jesus just the way you write, and HOW MUCH THIS PAIRING MAKES SENSE. naruto mum was a crazy bitch, and it makes sense that he's attracted to a crazy bitch (some real word psychology shit) and tayuya Is like the perfect match. Plus we both seem to dislike the naruhina pairing that's popular on this site.

Bro you need to finish this. Whether it's small af chapters every couple months or not, this is seriously the best thing on the site. Other stories just go "oh hai naruto I'm girl I love you let's fuck" where actually go into the depth of it and its perfect.

Don't give up on this bro please please please.
There's no way you hate writing because how the fuck can you your so good at?

I will seriously pay you to continue this dude. This is seriously publish quality stuff.

Hopefully you change your mind my friend. I'll try review every chapter to boost your count because you deserve it.
Peace out
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 44 . 11/18/2015
please continue.
brandon chapter 44 . 11/17/2015
I hope yugito will be alright. Nibi too.
Warrof chapter 44 . 11/17/2015
Frell... I only now realize how much i liked this story several months after you quit writing... Not enough good Naruto/Tayuya stories.
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 11 . 11/15/2015
Sakura did deserve it. I'd love to smack her around for the shit she always does with naruto.
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