I am way too excited that the word "Defenestration" was used, AND in the correct context.

if ya wanna complain about the war arc and amount of bullshit aim it at naruto's skill set which basically is shadow clones rasengan different types rasengan rasensuriken sagemode and lets not forget if it al fails the infamous bullshit skill talk no jutsu. and his hidious orange jumpsuit even his outfit in shipudden looks nothing like something a ninja should wear

tbh if this story isn't completed which i think it isn't it is a bit saddening since it is a really good story in my opinion

This is so well written I can’t believe it’s on a crack ship fic. People generally reserve that kinda talent for more popular ships. I feel blessed.

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. . . . . . . . . Mybad 7

Nothing wrong with hating the way something went but still enjoying the earlier episodes. There are some otherwise good series with legendary shit endings or mid season derails.

"For the first time in thirteen years, he had someone to say goodnight to - other than his photo of team seven, anyway"

Oof, right in the feels
I'm not the easiest person to get that kind if reaction from either
That line was powerful

This is in the third paragraph "faggot ass prettyboy"

The reference earlier was to chess right not shogi? There are no queens in shogi! The closest thing to a queen in shogi is a promoted rook called a dragon.

very interesting. to bad the story is over.

Man, that escalated quickly...

Well, it's such a shame such a great story has ended.

Well, this was confusing, why has Naruto left and I wonder what's gonna happen next.

I loved the interaction of the girls with Naruto. Funny.

Well that went downhill way to quickly, Naruto's an idiot, Naruto is far to DUMB, he's pretty much fucking up everything because of his idiocy, as soon as the stalker started stripping he should have put his foot down and told her he was leaving, Tayuya's is or was his girlfriend and he knows the stalker likes him but instead of leaving he stayed like a fucking moron, and then he says something stupid like he did what a moron, although he didn't actually say he wished she was dead, the next chapter should be intense, Tayuya should just destroy the weak stalker and Naruto should just kill Sai the next time he sees him.