Reviews for The Melody of the Fox
PenguinOtaku chapter 44 . 1/8/2015
I understand why you are stopping and although I am a bit upset, I'm okay with it too. Just so you know, I loved the story and actually like how you changed the plot line from the original. (I hate the war part too.)
Kano chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
Yo Arcane, MAYBE, your being harsh here. Weiting a story aint a cake walk, and having 4k people waiting for an update from you is KINDA stressful, ya know. Saw your account, no stories. Write one yourself and get 4k favorites, then u can talk trash.
ArcaneMaverick chapter 43 . 1/6/2015
Glad I skipped to the end and found this abanonded. Well, it was pretty much crap from the beginning and then you had them break up extremely stupidly. No loss then other than my time. Good riddance.
ArcaneMaverick chapter 29 . 1/6/2015
Such crap. Do I even continue? Tayuya better have a legit reason for losing her mind at the mere mention of earth country AND more importantly pushing Naruto away. Her behavior was downright sad and/or pathetic. She is such a whiny selfish hypocritical brat.
ph chapter 32 . 1/2/2015
Sooooooo slow
Guest chapter 2 . 1/2/2015
Fuck, I messed up the link, i meant
Guest chapter 2 . 1/2/2015
Someone plaguerized part of Jetslingers chapter 2 in their own, they stole a part of his story and removed my review calling it out, Look in Salam's s/9993831/1/Only-the-strong-survive Chp.2, sound familiar to some of the words near the end in jets when Tayuya trains Naruto? Such a same people would take from authors who arnt even here anymore to defend their own work..
ArcaneMaverick chapter 28 . 12/29/2014
Jesus. What a crazy panic attack she had.
Fine chapter otherwise.
Guest chapter 44 . 12/28/2014
Amazing! Keep updating!
ArcaneMaverick chapter 26 . 12/19/2014
That was weak. What a cop out have a past reflection than actually writing the event.

Haha, you got death threats because people are invested in what you write. Don't fuck it up.
ArcaneMaverick chapter 25 . 12/19/2014
If the next chapter doesn't begin with Tayuya flipping out for being kissed by someone she doesn't like without her permission, I am going to have an aneurysm. And I will wish that horrible awful things happen to you. I'm serious. You think I'm joking? I am not.
Damien chapter 44 . 12/16/2014
I've been following this story for years, I sincerely wish you wouldn't just quit, maybe just accept a slower pace, 4 or so months per update isn't too bad.
I know others that haven't updated in over a year.
Kribble the Mighty chapter 35 . 12/6/2014
Please write citrus, I love citrus. It's my favorite fruit, especially when it's all juicy and the liquids from inside splash all over...
Kribble the Mighty chapter 27 . 12/6/2014
So, does Naruto look like Minato now, or...
Kribble the Mighty chapter 15 . 12/6/2014
Talking from what looks to be a checkpoint:
I gotta say, I like this story so far. Tayuya is fairly believable, even if I thought she was a bit quick to accede to the Will of Fire; but then, Naruto does have that effect on people.
The one thing I feel a little concerned about (and this is fairly minor) is your characterization of Hinata. While I feel like her actions would be believable if she was a more outgoing character, the fact that she tends to internalize a lot more than externalize decreases my suspension of disbelief. Of course, right here I'm only a third of the way through the current story, so perhaps she'll get better. Or maybe there'll be an orgy. That should loosen everyone up.
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