cool story so far.

This was interesting, but u can't admit that Tayuya's not thinking clearly Naruto has a bad vibe about Sai and it's to be expected he works for the freak Danzo, instead of Tayuya considering that Sai, maybe after something she's lashing out because she thinks Naruto's jealous, maybe in a way he is, this is an interesting pairing honestly.

This was an OK chapter seems that Kurama's also fixed her fertility problem lol, the Hyuga's gonna be a pain I bet same for that retard Danzo and Sai, I wonder what the freak's after as Tayuya will most likely be the newest member of Team 7 so Sai will have no place there.

This was interesting I expected some shocks, Sakura doesn't look at Naruto with lust Ino I think does and the stalker well it's obvious, I can't stand the bimbo myself, but it adds to the drama, but she's also losing the battle already or possibly already lost the war as Naruto and Tayuya are already dating, with that weirdo Sai, making a presence it should spice things up, Danzo is a demented fool, he seems to underestimate Naruto like everyone else and thinks he'll be easy to control, what a senile old fool, I wonder what happens next.

"while it seems like you're taking five seconds and thirty steps in that one, barely even a millisecond has passed in this one" Since Minato had to kill 1000 Iwa ninja one by one, he would've spent days on that

This was a nice chapter like the others of course, but now there about to enter Konoha this will be interesting and I can't wait for it, I'm not bothered that your not following Canon, the anticipation to what's gonna happen is exciting.

Well, this was cool Naruto and Tayuya are both confused about this new relationship although I think more Tayuya than Naruto, it seems that stalker's up to something I skipped all of that party because I don't Give a fuck about her, as I said in the last review things will be different once they return to Konoha.

Well, this was amusing as always, it's also different than any story I've read about the training trip a big part of that is obviously the additions of Tayuya and Anko and all he's done and who he's interacted with, I've also not read a story where the Suna siblings see Naruto as family, now NaruTayu are getting closer but it's been coming for a while now, I think the most amusing thing will be once he returns to Konoha and the reactions of his friends.

This was a nice chapter and sweet and Naruto/Tayuya finally kissed should it move to an M rating the answer is YES, I can't wait for more.

Well, that was amusing so now Tayuya and Temari are sort of friends Temari also sees Naruto as Family so it wasn't that Temari after seeing Naruto wasn't fantasising about him, next chapter should be interesting but I keep saying that.

This was quite interesting I think the next 2 months are gonna be quite amusing, for Naruto and Tayuya.

This was pretty cool now there heading to Suna, and nice fight those Root drones are weak.

Well I'm rather sad and disappointed this won't ever get an ending, that we won't get to see Naruto and Tayuya make up and get back together. It was such a good read, too.

This was pretty interesting and kinda amusing, it is sad though that Tayuya won't be able to have kids I think that was what you were insinuating, I think they both like each other more than they say, deep down I think Tayuya likes Naruto more than she says but just won't admit it, still, the stories great and ebntertaining.

Well, damn, that was unexpected, but also cute, they make a cute couple, can't wait for more.