Ummm... I know he doesn't use it much, but Naruto is VERY sneaky when he wants to. Outrunning Anbu squads, painting the entire hokage mountains.

Can I point out how it makes ZERO sense for Jiraya to withhold the secret training method of shadow clones, maybe in the anime it was an asspull to power Naruto up, but you, the author, already know about it. Jiraya should be abusing the hell out of it to improve Naruto's taijustu.

Amazin'

Man this is rough... a man should never beg for love because it gives the opposite. But i think you know already. With naruto here i think it was because of his childhood traumas that he failed to do ’s making up, but then there is begging to make up.

Holy crap your writing is spectacular.

Yeah naruto anime was getting really crazy when dead people started coming back like madara. It was getting a little out of hand is all I'm trying to say. Side note love this story

Wow that was an amazing chapter. Very enlightening.

Wow thats a surprising chapter. Really like how naruto is getting some development. That chapter ending was pretty neat to very creative.

U got me all the way fricked up got me fricked up all the u were gonna end the story then u might as well have done a really good ending, not have them break up and stuff. The ending should’ve been like “ they ran away from the village and settled down, and lived happily ever after!”

To be honest, i just found this story fanfic. Its been around 3 days since i found it and it breaks my heart to know that the story is discontinued, and i mean
it literally broke my heart. I wish that you would please continue the story or at least tell us how it would ended. Its just too good of a story for you to abandon it. I hope you are well and find the time to actually continue it, you are awesome writer and i really hope that you would continue it. God bless you buddy!

fuck man you really just gonna leave the granddaddy of this crack ass pair out in a limbo? this shit is way too good for that

HEY MAN, I've got an idea. You're working right now so you can't continue the fic. It's just my thought, but what if you quit your job and become an excellent writer. Your stories are just too great, you can even make money from them. Try to write a book. Or at least continue this story.

You can write a book based on this story too! It's the best story I've ever read, despite it being a fanfiction. An awesome mix of Adventure, Action, Romance, and Angst.

DAMN THIS IS TOO MUCH

I hope you read this...

I really do...

don't hang it like that dammit. The story was just getting built up

IT DID TOOK 3 YEARS MAN.

they managed to upgrade their relationship, but then they thought they're not worth it? damn it. Why can't you just enjoy what life gives you?