Reviews for The Melody of the Fox
DarkestLight234 chapter 19 . 5/11/2020
Ummm... I know he doesn't use it much, but Naruto is VERY sneaky when he wants to. Outrunning Anbu squads, painting the entire hokage mountains.
DarkestLight234 chapter 18 . 5/11/2020
Can I point out how it makes ZERO sense for Jiraya to withhold the secret training method of shadow clones, maybe in the anime it was an asspull to power Naruto up, but you, the author, already know about it. Jiraya should be abusing the hell out of it to improve Naruto's taijustu.
gh chapter 44 . 4/29/2020
Sly-carrots chapter 43 . 4/19/2020
Man this is rough... a man should never beg for love because it gives the opposite. But i think you know already. With naruto here i think it was because of his childhood traumas that he failed to do ’s making up, but then there is begging to make up.
Sly-carrots chapter 36 . 4/19/2020
Holy crap your writing is spectacular.
Sly-carrots chapter 32 . 4/18/2020
Yeah naruto anime was getting really crazy when dead people started coming back like madara. It was getting a little out of hand is all I'm trying to say. Side note love this story
Sly-carrots chapter 30 . 4/18/2020
Wow that was an amazing chapter. Very enlightening.
Sly-carrots chapter 21 . 4/18/2020
Wow thats a surprising chapter. Really like how naruto is getting some development. That chapter ending was pretty neat to very creative.
Elle4Life chapter 44 . 4/7/2020
U got me all the way fricked up got me fricked up all the u were gonna end the story then u might as well have done a really good ending, not have them break up and stuff. The ending should’ve been like “ they ran away from the village and settled down, and lived happily ever after!”
Vladi chapter 1 . 4/2/2020
To be honest, i just found this story fanfic. Its been around 3 days since i found it and it breaks my heart to know that the story is discontinued, and i mean
it literally broke my heart. I wish that you would please continue the story or at least tell us how it would ended. Its just too good of a story for you to abandon it. I hope you are well and find the time to actually continue it, you are awesome writer and i really hope that you would continue it. God bless you buddy!
Raver1601 chapter 44 . 2/10/2020
fuck man you really just gonna leave the granddaddy of this crack ass pair out in a limbo? this shit is way too good for that
chronos151 chapter 1 . 2/3/2020
HEY MAN, I've got an idea. You're working right now so you can't continue the fic. It's just my thought, but what if you quit your job and become an excellent writer. Your stories are just too great, you can even make money from them. Try to write a book. Or at least continue this story.

You can write a book based on this story too! It's the best story I've ever read, despite it being a fanfiction. An awesome mix of Adventure, Action, Romance, and Angst.


I hope you read this...

I really do...
chronos151 chapter 44 . 2/3/2020
don't hang it like that dammit. The story was just getting built up
chronos151 chapter 38 . 2/2/2020
chronos151 chapter 37 . 2/2/2020
they managed to upgrade their relationship, but then they thought they're not worth it? damn it. Why can't you just enjoy what life gives you?
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