|Reviews for Zipper|
| BlueSpiritFire1 chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Love it so far and although i know it's been ages, i would love to see some more get added. The writing style makes me laugh and i;m enjoying the way you make Axel seem a lot more evil than other fics i've read. More true to the character i say. Good work so far and i look forward to more if it comes (i hope it does).
| ohscrewthename chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I doubt you'll continue this, but I can always hope. The writing flows well, and the character's reactions and interactions are within character.
| AlwaysWaitingFor chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
oh please please PLEASE continue!
| ring for an augustine chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
Oh my, this was superb! I stumbled across this by happenstance, and boy, am I glad I did. The concept is really neat, and I'm enjoying how you've characterized Axel and Kairi so far, as well as their interactions, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. I'm usually not one for multi-chaptered fic, but I'll definitely be following this one! Thank you!
| caitlinkeitorin chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
O.o say wah?
| kenokosan chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
plz update, oh not bad on changing kairi's outfit i always wondered if she the jacket...
| Serenity Komoshiro chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
Oh dear God! I want more, like now..please! I really want to know what will happen next. Can't wait for the update!
| Illucida chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
This is rather interesting and very creative. I hope to read more soon. _
| Manga-Greed chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
Interesting story idea. Please update soon.
| Cattycheeno chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
I just finished reading one of your other fics and went to your profile and found this!
T w T My goodness. I like it! You're too good, you know that? I'm excited..XD I hope the plot bunnies attack soon... I want to read the next chapter! *Squeal*
| some random person chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
You are going to continue this, right? You better. Good stories are hard to come by these days. XP
| Vampireplatypus chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
OMG This is SO GOOD! :D Good job!
| overlordofnobodies chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
That was Great! I like how she got the uniform of the Organization and how it fet. I really really hope you will update this story some time soon.
| La Editor chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
The summary was enough to interest me, the first line was enough to keep me reading, and it easily carried me to the end and made me want more.
This is VERY good. The communication lines work; the way they treat each other. The only thing I really worry about is how this particular pairing can work unless Axel can feel, because I implore you not to turn it into an 'Axel can care less, Kairi luvs him ooey gooey ANGST' thing. Please.
Perhaps he steals someone elses heart, or Kairi gives him a bit of hers, accidentally or purposely, just a thought, hmm?
I particularly like the way you wrote the Cheshire Cat - I cannot begin to imagine his character (then again, I haven't seen Alice in Wonderland for a while, or KH1), but I'd say he was fairly well written and the message was just as cryptic and smoothly said as the real one would pride himself on.
Anyway, I'm surprised to find there isn't much I can complain about. The storyline is great so far. The idea is superb, the writing is nice and fitting and eloquent but not overly burdening. It slows a bit near the end, but that was something I had to search for, I honestly can't find anything to complain about.
Nice title, too. Much better than anything having to do with fire, hearts, or princesses, because most of those titles are lame. :)
Soo... you should update, too. Soon, maybe. :D
| korinara chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
Wow! I must say, this has to be the best Axel/Kairi story out there. It has tremendous promise, and ever word is perfectly placed. Nothing seems amiss.
I'm particularly intrigued with the plot. You must have thought pretty hard about that lunar eclipse business, huh? But it's wonderful, and I am hopelessly, irrevocably in love with your story.
It's been a few months since you've published this, but I'm not about to give up hope. ;) Stranger things have happened, after all.
Waiting anxiously for chapter two