|Reviews for Completion|
| zunaira ghazal chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
that was so sweeeeeeet!
| Shubhs chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Aw!That was EXCELLENT!REALLY like it!XP XD XD XD XD XD XD D P
| BananaphoneBob chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
AWW! So cute, so cute! I LOVED it so much! )
| kattylin chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
| iMissa chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
VERY touching. I loved it . I can totally see this being Sasuke's thoughts; like he doesn't want Sakura to be close to him (even though, duh, us SasuSaku fans know he secretly does) but she will be the girl who he will marry. And someday, maybe, slowly, perhaps, he'll love her.
Because Sakura completed him.
Deep inside him, the part of his soul he thought to be long dead…loved her.
Those were my two favorite lines. Though that could be my inner SasuSaku fangirl doing the cha-cha slide in utter happiness, but who knows? Great job!
| Silver Element chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
Very interesting! _ It kinda makes me worry for Sakura-chan though... that icecicle might break her if he isn't careful. ;_;
I do like the way you 'explained' things, with the patience and love that Sasuke clearly lacks. And I currently see only one typo:
(Not referring to the process of actually creating the members, but that of course wouldalso