Reviews for Melody
Fate Camiswhil chapter 9 . 2/23/2013
this is a really nice story, it's so sad that it had to be left unfinished like this... can't believe I didn't review the first time I read this, so here you go :D

AsuCaga always works out in the end, so even if this was left undone, I can still that happy ending for my beloved OTP...XD

Auel and Meyrin are surprisingly doing a good job as a pair, it's cute... and I have to admit that I use them as one of my pairs too... :D

Shinn and Stellar's pairing is as cute as ever...X3 Rey and Luna aren't as bad either, I seriously prefer them then ShinnLuna :)

I wanted to make some predictions for this story, but I don't think you'll come back to finish this so... I'll just leave this as an unsolved mystery or sorts...XD unfinished fics turn beautiful like that in time... :D

thanks for a great read! I'm still content somehow :)

-Lynx
Hana chapter 9 . 7/23/2008
Your story is great!

I really want to read more!

I love how you but some of the chapters in different character's points of view.

I wonder whats going to happen next...

I am now a fan of your stories! )

Hope you update soon!

Wish you luck! )
Milisante chapter 9 . 2/4/2008
I'm so fond of your story!

please, continue it!

It's so great I can't find the words to express my feelings!

Love it!

miu
Minakaze Kazumi chapter 9 . 1/14/2008
what did I say about your story with a plot? Now you've added a twist to it! I kind of forsee the situation between Athrun and Cagalli, but Stellar's family sounds pretty messed up!

Update soon!
cottongreentea chapter 9 . 1/9/2008
OH! I knew it was Azrael! Alot of peeps have been using Azrael as Stellar's relative. O! Poor Asucaga! ToT

Really? WOW! Grade 12 was that hard? I thought it was easy, even with Physics! But dat was a year ago. ToT
DruggiesLove chapter 9 . 1/7/2008
yay you updated

feel awful for athcaga but steshin is cute!

Auel is the BEST!
AsuCaga01 chapter 9 . 1/7/2008
So, they gave too separate again...Nice chapter and update soon
NatsuLucyNatsu chapter 9 . 1/5/2008
lot's of twists! update soon!
impulsedestiny chapter 9 . 1/5/2008
happy new year to you too! i luv shinn in this chapter!

oh update alternate universe plz
shiloah18 chapter 9 . 1/5/2008
itai..! . baka no paparazzi! the same goes for Yuna! XC

I hate gOodbyes.. T-T

ahh, yes.. find out which b*stard tOok the bLOody picture.. or b*tch for FLay's case.. XC

ahh, yes.. I can just imagine AueL shouting at the pOor things..

more respect for the head master I sEe..

Mt. JouLe? lol XD

hmm.. just pLain Yzak? no "Mr.", "sir" or "boSs"? *sighs* oh shrug.. nvm..

woOhOo! Shiho! XD

Loussier.. Muruta..

bLoOdy heLL! why isn't SteLLar's okaa-san stopping that b*stard from hurting her? XC

nyWeiZ, Shinn to the rescue! XD 'bout Caggy's prob.. Athrun's fiLthy rich ne? why can't he take Cags and her otou-sama with him? *sighs* oh weLL.. suteki update! jaa ne in your next chap! ;3
mush4170 chapter 9 . 1/4/2008
I have read your story, as guilt as innocent and this. Though I didn't remain any review in that story I so so loved that.

And, I'm sorry to point out this..

O-ni(or O-nee) means brother in Japanese,

and On-e means sister.. "o" means that cliing person has admire or respect in the called person. (ex)) If I call your sister, I'll think "O-Ne-San" is ok. because she's not my family member.)

So I think "Ne-chan" is okay.

I'm not Japanese though.. I wanted to tell you.

Sorry for much interude ;

I think your work is very good. especially plot, and the storyline. What a logical story it is..:)

And more Athcaga, plz(lol)
Hades.Throne.Heiress chapter 9 . 1/4/2008
Azrael's afraid of Shinn? And how did he get Stellar? From so far away? He deserves a butt kick )

Maybe Athrun will be very very generous and help pay for the hospital fees of Cagalli's and she doesnt have to be engaged to Yunna anymore. But she wouldn't accept that offer would she?

Update soon and appy new year to you too )
Kelly chapter 9 . 1/4/2008
Well, you're gonna hear the usual from me - UPDATE SOON!
Evian chapter 9 . 1/4/2008
yay Stellar's back in the story! I'm so happy you've finally updated! I must read more about Stellar's family!
Justicez chapter 9 . 1/4/2008
Wow, i must say that i am very impressed with this story, its getting interesting, although i must say that there are quite a number of mute people. I hope to see the next chapter soon xD
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