Reviews for The personal 'romantic' life of Hajime Saito
Andy Tiu chapter 1 . 3/3
I'm a huge fan of the Rurouni Kenshin, and you made a good story after the Jinchi incident, very nice, hope you can continue making the same kind of story hopefully about that oniwaban girl and hiko (Kenshin's Master) I remember something romantic was going on between the two but they never followed through with the story and about Tsubame and Yahiko. Thanks for the great story...
Dean chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
Whatever happened with megumi and Sanosuke? i wanna know now.
Dean chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
That was pretty funny to be fair haha, good stuff.
mgaa chapter 2 . 1/26/2013
oh gosh...this is hilarious...oh my gosh...please do write a sequel about toriatama and kitsune...i really enjoyed this one(though they were out of character)
maglors harp chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
This is a cute story. However, there are several areas you could work on as a writer:

1. Your punctuation is not very good. You forget to put commas and don't put full-stops where they belong.

2. Your past and present tense is off. You write 'bend' instead of 'bent'.

3. Another issue would be your syntax. You write, "Saito stepped with his foot on the cigarette." It should be, "Saito stepped on the cigarette with his foot." Sounds a lot better, eh?

4. While I can picture the dialogue clearly, your narrative could be worked on. You don't describe anything, like what your characters are wearing or what they look like. I know we already DO know what they look like, but since you are writing a story and not illustrating a manga, you should describe their appearance.

Take care,

Maglor
deathshade37 chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
thats some funny shit!thanks for writing it.
safa56bmc chapter 2 . 8/28/2009
aw so sweet...plz plz plz plz ...finish it...i loved the part of kenshin in a kimono...
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 2 . 4/16/2009
LOL. VERY funny. I loved it. WRITE MORE!

ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX! ROOSTERHEAD & FOX!
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
*claps* BRAVO! I LOVED IT!

WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE! WRITE MORE SAITO-TOKIO PLEASE!
xieloinfehrnurom chapter 2 . 6/26/2008
saito felt a little "off" here...

and you have a different portrayal of tokio...

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the roosterhead and the fox huh...

i'll be waitng for the next one! .
Anime's-mistress chapter 2 . 10/16/2007
This story is great! I love the whole idea, it's hilarious. Another part would be good. C:
Sailor Pandabear chapter 2 . 6/24/2007
Kenshin: Oro!

Me: Hahaha!
sanomegumi4ever chapter 2 . 6/14/2007
ha ha! this is the most hilarious story i've ever read! i love the part when they realized that kenshin is a man! keep up the good work.
Tri17 chapter 2 . 6/6/2007
Oh, gosh, this story was so hilarious! I loved the part when Hiko walked in! Great job!
danielitar89 chapter 2 . 5/15/2007
my stomach hurts from laughing keep on going as long as you please because this is good stuff
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