|Reviews for Shinobi OneHalf|
| Dreamingfox chapter 7 . 1/27/2009
Very deep and imaginative, and the way that you paint the picture of the story is very vivid and believable. Great job on presentation and execution of a truly wonderful fic!
| Digineko1a chapter 7 . 1/27/2009
"Clean up a house... and you claim that is a C-class mission? Give me a break." "Well we aren't really sure about the creatures hiding in the lawn but we do know that they can defeat a summoned snake, and if there aren't any new chapters it might just come looking for the author to demand them."
Chuunin and Hokage.
| Jeremiah Lewis chapter 7 . 1/26/2009
Nice to see a couple new chapters. Nothing as far as questions or comments goes. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next one!
| Mesterio chapter 7 . 1/26/2009
I like the way you've set up the progression of a relationship between Ranma and Nabiki. Being together every night is eventually going to have consequences once Nabiki doesn't want it to stop, and the same goes for Ranma.
My suggestion is to not go down the classic road of, "I'm in denial that I like you so i'm going to make myself go out with someone else to prove it not true." I know there hasn't been any hint of it yet, but it's been done too many times it seems inevitable. My suggestion is to either let them continue to slowly come to like each other or bring them together during a dangerous situation. (If you havent noticed by now I'm cheering for a Ran/Nab story.)
Liked the latest chapter, but its certainly been a while. Hope you update soon because your story is very good. Till next time.
| Rune Tobor chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
It would be nice to have a chapter telling what the Nerima Idiots are up to. If I remember right we left them with Kasumi possessed by an oni and the Dumb Duo digging for Ranma. I can see Kasumi making the lives of the panda, her father, and her "baby sister" miserable. She could add too much spice at the end of cooking a meal, just not to her plate. She could let Akane cook, VEG. they deserve that. In fact what if both sisters cooked and Kasumi added a paralysis powder so Akane could spoon feed them her "cooking" aka poison.
The amazons are also a source of mirth, the old bat could do a ritual to find Ranma and be told to leave him alone. With their attitudes I feel that the amazons have likely pissed off many kami. Raijin could visit, after all his servants are involved.
With Nabiki and Ranma gone I bet the bill collectors will decend on the dojo like flies on turds. Soun does not teach and the panda seems incapable of work.
Just some ideas for you.
Thanks for the update and please keep writing. :)
| Al-Ocramed chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
Man, I'm envious of your skill at pacing. :(
Anyway, good job as always, and keep up the good work! :)
| OBSERVER01 chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
great fic the nwc do end up in the naruto world it should be during naruto it up
| beartooth chapter 7 . 1/24/2009
Great story so far!
| The Wandering Soul of 1014 chapter 7 . 1/24/2009
-About time that you started writing again! You seem to be the best when it comes to Ranma crossovers, and you have a ton of stories that I want to see updated. Keep it up, and please try to keep the between-update periods shorter!
Happy writing, and update soon!
| Wonderbee31 chapter 7 . 1/24/2009
Wonderful section here, and Ranma is struggling with some parts here, and can't wait to see how things play out for he and his companions as they keep making their way, as well as who might be interested in him later on as they start to learn more about their powers.
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| Virosa chapter 7 . 1/24/2009
YAY one chapter down more to come, very soon i hope.
| cabrera1234 chapter 7 . 1/24/2009
thanks for the update :)
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 7 . 1/24/2009
If things don't change with the sealing of Kyuubi I can totally see Naruto and Nabiki taking in Naruto as their adopted son. And I can see Anko hiding tears of joy that Ranma wants her to move in since most people don't trust her.