Reviews for Shinobi OneHalf
shugokage chapter 4 . 2/25/2013
Great story!
jaelin910 chapter 3 . 2/19/2013
an ironic solution to fighting gai; use his 'flames of youth' against him
I'm not sure if that should be considered a weakness or not...sure he'll fall for the illusion immediately but that's probably not a good thing for whoever used it on him
ToastedPine chapter 9 . 2/1/2013
This was extremely entertaining.

Nabiki's character progression has been very pleasant. Kudos on not using th Raiju to cheapen her development, only bring attention to them. Your attention to clan politics is also nice, not as dark as what's par for the course.

That cat spirit in Ranma, is it really a cheetah, because of it is, I think that it normally trills and barks instead of meowing, not sure though. Either way, it's a small detail, I like how you're handling the nekoken in a measured and non-metroanime style way.

I'm also wondering if you'll have some character development for Ranma. What you have is good, just wondering if you'll go as far with him as what you've done with Nabiki.

Thanks for writing!
G-Dog chapter 9 . 12/19/2012
Great story, please continue.
Lerris chapter 9 . 10/24/2012
This is still a decent story, although you'd have to probably get through at least the Kyuubi's attack to call it complete...
Al-Ocramed chapter 9 . 4/9/2012
Loved it. I hope you can return to this story someday...
Avid Reader chapter 9 . 2/19/2012
Hey Innortal!

I used to be an avid reader of your works (hence the name) a year or two ago. I've been reading your stories since at least '07 and they've all been awesome. Sadly, this is your most recently updated story and it's from almost two years ago! I've been missing your stories about the crazy antics of Ranma, Harry, and Naruto in all kinds of different situations. I just wanted you to know that I love and still reread your work from time to time, and I wanted to know what's up with you? You seem to have dropped off the radar. Are you taking a hiatus? Keep me and the rest of Fanfiction posted!

Most sincerely,

Avid Reader

Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
this is awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
flairina chapter 9 . 12/22/2011
So... update soon, perhaps? Because leaving it here just isn't right. :(
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 9 . 8/6/2011
Is the story discontinued?
Reader Just A chapter 9 . 8/2/2011
This is great, not that I'm surprised, you do good work. I definitely hope to read more of this.
donald7777 chapter 9 . 7/19/2011
Great story so far can't wait for the next chapter.

Chapter lengths are a nice size, you are really able to get into the story.

It is nice to see Nibiki getting her character developed, many times in other storys she is completly passed over.

I hope you don't bring in bring int he fiancies and other nerima crew in too fast. It is nice just the way it is right now.

Story has been faved and alerted.
Deadzepplin chapter 6 . 7/14/2011
That Uchiha is A laugh and a half that's for sure
animefreak 171 chapter 9 . 7/7/2011
Good fic I hope u update soon
kaori and yoshi chapter 9 . 6/28/2011
they are progressing nicely! i can tell that this story will be well worth the wait!
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