|Reviews for Shinobi OneHalf|
| Vilkath chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
An interesting story and I hope to see it continued some day. Always nice to see a cross over that does not stick to canon for every little thing. Setting this story before Naruto was even born was a great way to avoid the normal pitfalls with Naruto-verse cross overs. I can only hope the story will be finished at some point, it is too good to let die.
| Frozen Tempest chapter 9 . 5/24/2011
Please update soon.
I been eagerly awaiting the next chapter for a year now.
| gaul1 chapter 9 . 4/24/2011
good chapter, keep up the good work, byes
| Firehedgehog chapter 9 . 2/6/2011
| GRIMMtheBITCH'1 chapter 9 . 12/28/2010
absolutely love this so far. Cannot wait until you update again. this ranma nabiki pairing is different but good.
| Rose1948 chapter 9 . 12/3/2010
Nicely done. I still think Jiraiya is channeling Rodney Dangerfield, though. ::chuckles::
| Rose1948 chapter 8 . 12/3/2010
"I swear, no respect," grumbled Jiraiya.
You sure he wasn't channeling Rodney Dangerfield when he said that? ::laughs::
"Your mission, Ranma, should you decide to accept it, is to find a missing cat." ::dies::
| Rose1948 chapter 7 . 12/3/2010
Nicely done. I like how you have Ranma facing his own... misgivings about certain things and thinking them through rather than ignoring them.
| erikalikesfire chapter 9 . 11/24/2010
I think you should take a look at the tvtropes pages on "Infodump" and "Shown Their Work".
Aside from the sometimes gratuitous exposition, a pretty good read.
| GaianLuck chapter 9 . 10/30/2010
Ranma/Naruto crossovers normally end up being a chi vs chakra technique fest, which end up going stale before they get off the ground. Nabiki added to this mix gives it a much needed social aspect. I love what you're doing with this story, and look forward to the next chapter.
I especially want to thank you for knowing how quotation marks work, which far too many authors can't seem to grasp.
| Hammerchuckery chapter 9 . 10/9/2010
...and then I saw the end of the story. NO! Anyway, this was some great story!
| red chapter 9 . 10/2/2010
love the story
| Dairegh chapter 9 . 9/22/2010
This is about the third or fourth story of yours I've read (sorry for not reviewing before now... I was too busy reading), and I've got to say: You, Innortal, are AWESOME! Of all of the Ranma 1/2 stories, that I've read, yours are among the top three best! You are DANG good! *double thumbs up* I hope you keep up the awesome writing, because I'll be looking forward to the next chapters eagerly!
| sparky555 chapter 9 . 8/14/2010
Dang! Hit the end! Can't wait to see more! Character progression, ocasional fight scenes, and no completely over powered fighters showing up, great writing this does make. Nice to see a Naruto universe story set before Naruto. Have to wonder whats going to have changed when they get closer to the Foxes arival in Konoha though.
| Trugeta chapter 9 . 8/5/2010
Really liked it. Especially the bit with Tora and how she may have caused Madara to get his Mangekyo. :D