|Reviews for Ink|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
This is so beautiful.
| Smash41KMF chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
wow, that was incredibly creative, and i loved it completly, it was sad a little, but it was good.
| Alyice chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Beautifully written. Can't believe how little reviews this got. I love the depth. I love your words, and I absolutely loved this fic. Amazingly well done.
| justcallmefaye chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
oh wow. your style of writing is amazing; you have the poetic prose thing downpat. and English isn't your first language, and you've grasped this style so well? i'm simmering with jealousy, then, for your obvious talents!
this is so bittersweet and sad. ah, gotta love the angst!
| MoonStarDutchess chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
It's a tad bit hard to follow but beautiful writing none the less. I loved it.
| Bizzy chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
That was very sad.
The letter is difficult to follow, which is okay becuase she obviously wrote it that way. However, for readers who don't know, it might've been good to insert the fact that Roy was trying to work it out in his head-'she means when her father put the array on her skin', etc. If you didn't know what was being talked about, then you'd be kind of confused. That said, however, putting that in might make the piece feel muddy. I face that problem sometimes too.
All in all, though it was a bit difficult to read, it was very well done. Even though I had a pretty good idea of what she was talking about, I could feel myself almost recoiling from the weight of it. I could see her saying this to him, speaking.
It's very sad, and very well written. Keep writing!