Reviews for Reality Flux: Armored Core and Bolo
lazyb0nes chapter 2 . 6/25/2011
Bolo stories are rare, and this is one of my favourites. Unlikely as it seems I did notice a couple of errors as I read through it yet again.

At one point during the section where Unit BTN is talking to Unit JRD she points out at internal conflict IDing her as a Mark XIV (14) nut earlier in the story she alternates between Marks XXXIII (33) and XXXIV (34). According to the book 'BOLO!' self awareness only truely developed with the mark XX (20) although I believe there is a story which involves a number of Mark XVI's (16) which had a non standard manufacturing process which where selfaware.

The other error noticed was the misspelt "wisomd".
Sdarian chapter 3 . 1/11/2011
Neat. Although, I really would have preferred that the BOLO was stuck there, since that would have been quite the tech boost for them.

Good job on this.
Kumoatsu chapter 2 . 6/21/2010
This is so good it made me cry. I could only basic in its after glow after finishing reading this for a full two minutes with tears in my eyes.
Kumoatsu chapter 3 . 6/21/2010
While the writing is not perfect, the grammar not completely correct, the story is one of the most beautiful I have ever read.
Rhavis chapter 3 . 5/20/2010
HAHAHAHAHA! This story was AWESOME!

I say you seriously need to make another one like it XD
mishap chapter 3 . 12/30/2009
I love a good Bolo story and this was a damned good one. I don't suppose that you have any more planned? I hope so, but if not thanks for writing this one.
BrazeRancor chapter 3 . 8/4/2009
Awesome idea. Of course, anything with Bolo's is awesome. An fine, interesting idea.
tpx1 chapter 3 . 7/27/2009
great story!
cklammer chapter 3 . 7/19/2009
Explosions, Explosions, Explosions - Yay!

What a nice tale. I liked it very much. Bolos kick ass best!
lord admiral belisarius chapter 3 . 7/7/2009
I must say, being a fan of both, that story was amazing. I especially like the Bolo surviving.
wolf-in-hell chapter 3 . 11/3/2008
this was good, are we going to see any more bolo crossover stories from you? I hope so.
Pruit Igoe chapter 3 . 6/27/2008
I have a soft spot for Bolo stories, ever since I read one of the originals when I was 12.

You have created a wonderful addition to the universe. Wonderful story.
Ben chapter 2 . 6/27/2008
I would just like to say that while the story is brilliant and everything, you are giving Ravens like me a bad name! sure not all missions are nice and polite but not all of us are monsters.
JovianJeff chapter 3 . 1/29/2008
Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! I've only seen Armored core never played it, but read just about all the Bolo stories published. You've captured the flavor of them perfectly. If there was a flaw in the story its that Asmodius died too quickly. Would have liked him to die as slow as some of his victims did. That aside, a magnificient tale of honor and nobility that Bolos are known for and making it a fairly good fight despite the technological advantage. Thank you also for the continuity, all in all a GREAT story. Thank you for writing this!
Mutsunokami chapter 3 . 9/13/2007
Awesome. Simply awesome. I've played the original Armored Core extensively, and I've read about the Bolo tanks. You rock.

PS: Favorited!
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