Reviews for Gods Among Us
Firewolfe chapter 7 . 2/28/2012
I do hope that you update this oneday soon. It is a very unique and interesting xover. Please don't leave it hang.
Firewolfe chapter 2 . 2/13/2012
Love to see an update. This is a unique cross that so needs more to it. Please update one day soon its a shame such a great fic is waiting to be finished.
Hammerchuckery chapter 4 . 4/7/2011
Huh just realize it was a Heroes crossover. Don't know anything about that show.
RandomImagination chapter 2 . 2/6/2010
This certainly sounds interesting. I love Vala. I was also laughing at the "one of the is clearly military" part, which is not only funny because it's so wrong, but because when Daniel first came to the SGC, he opposed pretty much the entire military philosophy. Except for when it came to Apophis, he made a bit of an exception for that. Over the years, though, he certainly changed a lot.

Anyway, please keep up the good work. Now excuse me while I pull up the wikipedia page for Heroes.
albeva chapter 23 . 12/9/2009
you have truly annoying tendency to start truly amazing and captivating stories and not finishing them. Updates?
RLS83843 chapter 22 . 9/19/2009
I like the reference to the Paladins
RLS83843 chapter 5 . 9/17/2009
Might be cool to see himj inh Jay Garrick's outfit.
RLS83843 chapter 2 . 9/17/2009
The airman should have flashed his id and did the National Secutiy Bit.
Hammurabi chapter 21 . 9/15/2009
"[...]but then again it was a Nokia, and in his experience Nokia mobile phones could hold power for enormous periods of time."

Are you getting paid for product placements? Unnecessary exposition.
Hammurabi chapter 13 . 9/14/2009
I'm about half-way through at this point. Funniest line so far: "You look like Time Lord." :)

And horrors, it's been EIGHT months since this story - which is still officially on your active list - has been updated. I get the feeling you are spreading yourself too thin with too many writing projects.

I think your stories are both creative and compelling. My biggest criticisms are:

1) The usual suspects in word confusion, such as: Their-there-they're, pray-prey, your-you're, were-we're, say-stay, and one time using "kingship" instead of "kinship". Confusion of plural vs possessive vs contraction, such as: city's - cities.

2) All these incomplete stories! From a reader's point of view, it's frustrating to be reading a good story, only to find

(See what I mean?)
nased0 chapter 23 . 8/30/2009
Great fic, very original and well written.

Superheroes are much more interesting than repetitive space battles.

Please continue, I can't wait for the next chapter!
CelineSSauve chapter 23 . 6/29/2009
Interesting. I'm not sure if you plan to continue, since it's been so long since the last update, but I do hope you do.
CelineSSauve chapter 2 . 6/25/2009
There are a few questions in this chapter which don't have question marks. Other than that, great story so far. I have all 23 chapters lined up but am presently wondering about Jansen's ability.
roger Lopez chapter 23 . 3/24/2009
great story
FORD B chapter 23 . 1/20/2009
Great chapter! Really can't wait to see where you go with this and when it all ends. Hopefully many, many chapters later.
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