Reviews for The Marriage Stone
Seven-Knives chapter 3 . 4/11/2007
I like the way you tell the forward to the next chapter.
ms.gringotts chapter 3 . 4/11/2007
I'm very happy you've decided to post this story and hope that you continue with it.

I liked all three chapters but I especially liked the last part of chapter three; how Harry waited pointedly for Severus to say thank you. You gave the character dignity and strength with that lit bit and that made the chapter more memorable.

Hope to see some more soon.
Sareia chapter 3 . 4/11/2007
It is a wonderful srory. I love it.

Hope you continue.
SeulWolfe chapter 3 . 4/11/2007
I adore this.. and LOVE this..

are you planning on regularly updating?
killerquyn chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
WOW! im so glad i found this story! it's really amazing. i absolutely love how it's written; the way you write makes the emotions so tangible! i found myself re-reading certain sentences a few times because they were so powerful! i can't wait until the next chapter, so i hope you update as soon as you can! its marvelous!
Imsosleepy55555 chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
Wonderful story! Absolutely love the plot, and the depth in which you have analyzed the characters xD Wonderful writing style too Exceptionally well done! Can't wait to read more
fukinperfect chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
please continue soon
Forgive my anon chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
Very nice. It's been a while since I've seen a good bonding fic. I shall be watching eagerly. :D
Shroo chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
Still loving this story. Give me more!
SpikesWoman77 chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
I really like this story! Hope you update soon. I cant wait for the attraction to start between the two.
queenanneus chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
oh...so exciting...another good hp/ss fic. i cannot wait to see where this is taken and what fudge will attempt next.
Faerylark chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
Most excellent. I esp loved Harry in that last scene. Sweet and defiant all at once. hehe And I agree Dumbledore or McGonagall are simply too old. And even if you don't make Hooch married or something... from a safety stance, she wouldn't be comparable to Snape as far as her ability to protect her husband.
reader chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
yay! thanks for updating so fast. This story is already beyond awesome, and it has only been three chapters! Harry is such a little wife. keep up the pace.

continue pls
Sabrina451 to lazy to login chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
Are you a new author? Cuz if you aren't i feel as though i've been missing something amazing for a while. This story is great!

I love how you portray EVERYONE, and this is the first fresh fic i've read in a while. I'm usually stuck rereading some Janara fics or Midnight_Blue's never updated novel Mirror of Maybe. This is great, please keep it up. I'll be watching you! (well, i'll be watching your author's page for updates on this fic. i don't stalk people anymore...after the incident with the restraining order and the doberman...*cringe*)

~Sabrina451
Selene Malfoy Lupin chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
wow this is a really good fic and please update soon. Now about Snape age.. I have to said that if Harry is 16 then severus is 35 because harry is born in 1980 and James and sirius did their last year at hogwarts in 1978 so you are rigth Severus is young. Well see you and please update soon
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