|Reviews for Dawn|
| MakeMeWantToKeepOnReading chapter 9 . 11/29/2008
i have a question, is this story over or still in progress?
if it's over don't be alarmed if i start crying.
I love this ff series and you are now on my favorites!
| LoveForDrakeAndJosh chapter 9 . 11/9/2008
No! Now they are still going after Bella! No no no no no!
| shadowstorm13 chapter 9 . 9/26/2008
awesome story i love this story
bad Aro i really hope to see some moree bell/edward n4ext chaoter they rule
plz update soon
| Lunardite chapter 9 . 6/4/2008
I loved the story and the one before it. It was awesome so please update soon.
| Kason08 chapter 9 . 5/18/2008
Aw! This chapter made me cry. Poor Jay! DON'T GIVE UP JAY! YOU CAN FIGHT HER POWER! YOU DID IT ONCE! KEEP FIGHTING JAY! And where the hell are the Cullens? I mean, I know there's only eight of them and like a hundred guards but COME ON! THEY CAN'T LEAVE JAY! Great job. Next chapter PLEASE?
| Nicky Morello chapter 9 . 4/9/2008
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! AND PLEASE KEEP JAY AND BELLA SAFE!
| tickle me emox3 chapter 8 . 2/3/2008
i need more
ive been waiting forever!
| moonlitroses733 chapter 8 . 2/1/2008
Yay :] that's exciting! How's everything been by the way? Its been awhile since we last talked
Oh yeah, its Aprylle-just wanted to make sure that you didn't think it was a weird psycho dude or anything. lol :D
| SiamoFantasma chapter 8 . 1/31/2008
Awesome! I've been waiting for a new chapter. Please continue writing!
| SiamoFantasma chapter 7 . 11/19/2007
Update please? The suspense is going to kil me.
Great story/plotline by the way. I'm dying to know what happens next.
| moonlitroses733 chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Yay you posted it! It's really good, I like it a lot. Keep going, I can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, by the way, I finally posted my POTC one yay!
| TwilghtLionLamb chapter 5 . 7/8/2007
this was a really good chappie.
update again soon!
| BattousaiChic chapter 5 . 7/1/2007
o, update soon! I wanna know what's up with Mike! _6 Keep it up!
| BattousaiChic chapter 4 . 7/1/2007
So...how does Aro know Jay? Very interesting! I like how you've kept his personality the same. lol. He's sort of funny in a freaky crazy way.
| BattousaiChic chapter 2 . 7/1/2007
Very cool! Keep it up! I can't wait to read the next few chappies. _