Reviews for While you sleep
xMousex chapter 1 . 7/18/2016
It was good, don't worry! It didn't have a lot of romance, but I think the small amount of romance fit this story pretty well.
pandora-88 chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
I love ... love it
LuckyBlackStar chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
That's it?
WhoInvitedMoonMoon chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Good story. English is a hard language to write if it isn't your first.
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
so cute
Cheeto-ScorpioDimagram chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Aw, so cute! :3
InuKeifer chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Some advice,when someone says something,you put "yourtexthere" around it.
Hey what's that gun for chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
zbuny chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
Great job! You should consider writing a full length story :)
SoulEaterMARLuver chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
You should make a sequeal where Deidara and Sakura go on a mission with Itachi and Kisame, like a 4-person mission. They have to face off aqainst a really tough and dangerous ninja and Dei,Saku,Ita, and Kisame each get afew injuries. They come back and celebrate after a long journey and have some sake. Deidara ends up getting drunk and makes out with Sakura,who is surprised but willing and happy. They don't have children though. That's my opinion for you to add. Great job on this one. Please consider and use my idea.
Crimson.Kaze chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
Wow for english as your second language this is really good. Trust me, I've seen some extremly scary stuff before. Aside from a few wronge tenses and to many commas it's wonderfull.
ilovemybishies87 chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
Interesting story! I would love to see the back story to this more in depth.
JudgeGooby chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
this isnt a oneshot is it? i hope not because its great! and i would kill to see more and i have no idea why people havnt really reviewed this! ITS AWESOME!
aubrey-coffin chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
i loved it so much pleaz write some more unless its a oneshot then im an idiot oh well this was good
iinsanitii chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
Not bad. I didn't really get the point of the story but its good all the same