|Reviews for The Story of 2 Teens|
| liley.emilyosment.javajunkie chapter 11 . 4/20/2012
Great story. Im hooked. Update soon. And yes lets kill chris. Hes an asshole and i hate him. Luke and lorelai all the way! :)
| udon'tknowmebutiknowme chapter 11 . 1/27/2008
u really really really need to add another chapter, plzplzplz!
| megantd1 chapter 11 . 12/28/2007
ii like it alot!
write more, please?
| JavaJunkieLUVAH chapter 11 . 10/24/2007
wow your story is amazing! please update soon!
i like the idea of a house falling on Chris )
| LemonDropsWoolSocks chapter 11 . 10/13/2007
dont make luke and lorelai pregant till there 20
| windsong09 chapter 11 . 9/26/2007
Oh my God! I love it so far... sorry i haven't reviewed before. I have so many stories that I read that I hardly have time to review to any of them... but I promise I will start reviewing to this one. You are evil... Can't wait for the update... Chris should die... i like your creativness of ways to kill him... how about a steamroller running him down on the street... that would be very cartoonish, but freakin hilarious.
| JavaJunkieMyMy chapter 11 . 9/17/2007
LOVED it soo much and of course i had to throw a house at chris..how else would he die lol :]
| widgetgirl chapter 11 . 9/17/2007
now to add onto your a/n at the end of the story.
Review. You'll throw a house on Chris...
Review. Chris is stuck outside a tornado comes along and sucks him up he is thrown by air into a cow's rear end... a new species of cow called chris cows are taking over the world... the only part sticking out is his head.
| 4everJavaJunkie chapter 11 . 9/17/2007
Me again...at work again...
gah sorry for that last review... I just re-read it an now I saw how many tyoing mistakes were in it... it's not my fault... it's the keyboard... This keyboard at work is freaking me out...
and with 'gerad ' I meant 'great' LOL
I can't say more than this chapter was really great again.
So...Liz is pregnant and Lorelai can'T imagine to loose her virginity... hm... I'm curious when she will loose it.
| Jeremy Shane chapter 11 . 9/16/2007
good chapter & more please & i would hire Eminem or 50 cent to kill Chris & kanye west Lol i thought it was Lorelei who was preggers not Liz
| LukeNLorelai637 chapter 11 . 9/16/2007
Lol... so cute... omg... i wonder what u could do with ALL your talent if it was Lorelai... lol... just work your magic and update you awesome story... ; P
| StanaTorv chapter 11 . 9/16/2007
i dunno about a house on top of chris. a 2 tonne anvil seems to be the better option really.
poor liz. i actually like her. she cracks me up to no end. and the fact that in the show shes married to a DeLuise. in my books thats pretty high.
| DarkPascual chapter 11 . 9/15/2007
Again, awesome work. Have to say that that Im really enjoying this story.
Sorry for the weird reference (anime-videogame guy here). Ill just say that a Fatality implies ninjas, sharp things, remove the head (and the spine...) from the body and, some times, became into a dragon...
Keep coming the great work!
| SparklingTopazEyes chapter 11 . 9/15/2007
Like in the Wizard of OZ! Whoo! Chris is under a house and his legs are rolled up! Great chapter! Update soon!
| BurningxRedxCaskett chapter 11 . 9/15/2007
*cackles...* lol...i'm from kansas so...i dropped a house on chris...lol...jk jk...i'm from california...haha...but i loved this chapter...you're not gonna make Lorelai pregnant or have sex in this story? that is a very good idea...every one (even i) have made rory luke's not chris's...which is how it should be. update soon!