Reviews for The Story of 2 Teens
KRaZY.KoLe.GaC chapter 11 . 4/20/2012
Great story. Im hooked. Update soon. And yes lets kill chris. Hes an asshole and i hate him. Luke and lorelai all the way! :)
udon'tknowmebutiknowme chapter 11 . 1/27/2008
u really really really need to add another chapter, plzplzplz!
megantd1 chapter 11 . 12/28/2007
ii like it alot!

write more, please?
JavaJunkieLUVAH chapter 11 . 10/24/2007
wow your story is amazing! please update soon!

i like the idea of a house falling on Chris )
LemonDropsWoolSocks chapter 11 . 10/13/2007
dont make luke and lorelai pregant till there 20
windsong09 chapter 11 . 9/26/2007
Oh my God! I love it so far... sorry i haven't reviewed before. I have so many stories that I read that I hardly have time to review to any of them... but I promise I will start reviewing to this one. You are evil... Can't wait for the update... Chris should die... i like your creativness of ways to kill him... how about a steamroller running him down on the street... that would be very cartoonish, but freakin hilarious.

:D Gayle
daydreamerrr chapter 11 . 9/17/2007
LOVED it soo much and of course i had to throw a house at chris..how else would he die lol :]
widgetgirl chapter 11 . 9/17/2007
nice chapter...

now to add onto your a/n at the end of the story.

Review. You'll throw a house on Chris...

Review. Chris is stuck outside a tornado comes along and sucks him up he is thrown by air into a cow's rear end... a new species of cow called chris cows are taking over the world... the only part sticking out is his head.
4everJavaJunkie chapter 11 . 9/17/2007
Me again...at work again...

gah sorry for that last review... I just re-read it an now I saw how many tyoing mistakes were in it... it's not my fault... it's the keyboard... This keyboard at work is freaking me out...

and with 'gerad ' I meant 'great' LOL

I can't say more than this chapter was really great again.

So...Liz is pregnant and Lorelai can'T imagine to loose her virginity... hm... I'm curious when she will loose it.

update ASAP

Jule
Jeremy Shane chapter 11 . 9/16/2007
good chapter & more please & i would hire Eminem or 50 cent to kill Chris & kanye west Lol i thought it was Lorelei who was preggers not Liz
LukeNLorelai637 chapter 11 . 9/16/2007
Lol... so cute... omg... i wonder what u could do with ALL your talent if it was Lorelai... lol... just work your magic and update you awesome story... ; P
StanaTorv chapter 11 . 9/16/2007
i dunno about a house on top of chris. a 2 tonne anvil seems to be the better option really.

poor liz. i actually like her. she cracks me up to no end. and the fact that in the show shes married to a DeLuise. in my books thats pretty high.

:D sam
DarkPascual chapter 11 . 9/15/2007
Again, awesome work. Have to say that that Im really enjoying this story.

Sorry for the weird reference (anime-videogame guy here). Ill just say that a Fatality implies ninjas, sharp things, remove the head (and the spine...) from the body and, some times, became into a dragon...

Keep coming the great work!
SparklingTopazEyes chapter 11 . 9/15/2007
Like in the Wizard of OZ! Whoo! Chris is under a house and his legs are rolled up! Great chapter! Update soon!
BurningxRedxCaskett chapter 11 . 9/15/2007
*cackles...* lol...i'm from kansas so...i dropped a house on chris...lol...jk jk...i'm from california...haha...but i loved this chapter...you're not gonna make Lorelai pregnant or have sex in this story? that is a very good idea...every one (even i) have made rory luke's not chris's...which is how it should be. update soon!
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