Really enjoyed the kids and Royai fluff. Thanks for the read :)

Really cute and fluffy story, with the cuteness of the children. This fanfic really warm my heart which was hugely damaged from some angst Royai fanfic that I've just finished reading, this is absolutely medicine for my sore heart! You know, I can't stop smiling while I was reading it, so cute 3

I like the end go this chap, especially when Roy said "...Starting right now...", so fluffy I want to die from this moment.

ust read this fic and I really loved, it generated a lot of emotions.

Thank you very much 3

I love the family moments here (especially with the whole Team Mustang around!) XD. It's a wonderful story overall. You did a great job!

Yeah that was pretty good man even though it was short.

Nothing to say really

Only two more chapters left sadly.

That wasn't so bad. In fact it was on a higher note then last chapter.

You're just wait till next chapter has me worried immensely.

Nice chapter. Hopefully there is only luck for Roy eh.

Well here we are nearing the end and there is nothing better then completeing a well written story I look forward to it.

Enjoyed this chapter emensly and you had me laughing my ass off after that quote at he end.

Good chapter.

Good chapter. I am blanking on things to say since I could not find anything wrong with this chapter.