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MadPhysics chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
I liked it. Wished there was more.

"It started in the back of the bus, Cash could see the three ladies"

Good plot. Should focus on grammar more. Put a period instead of the coma above. There was som ewhere else above that needed grammer fixing.

Over all a good read.
BLAKKSTONE chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Intriguing, but I will write more when there is more.

Good characterization on GRIFTER and BACKLASH.

I think that both these stories are merely chapters of the same story. May I suggest that put them together in one story.

PS.: Btw, I am currently picking up several ULTRAVERSE books, and I bought a run of BLOODSHOT, some X-O and issue 1 of ARMORINES. I might grab some NINJAK.