|Reviews for Kindred 0 2 Crits Wanted|
| MadPhysics chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
I liked it. Wished there was more.
"It started in the back of the bus, Cash could see the three ladies"
Good plot. Should focus on grammar more. Put a period instead of the coma above. There was som ewhere else above that needed grammer fixing.
Over all a good read.
| BLAKKSTONE chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Intriguing, but I will write more when there is more.
Good characterization on GRIFTER and BACKLASH.
I think that both these stories are merely chapters of the same story. May I suggest that put them together in one story.
PS.: Btw, I am currently picking up several ULTRAVERSE books, and I bought a run of BLOODSHOT, some X-O and issue 1 of ARMORINES. I might grab some NINJAK.