|Reviews for One Last Time|
| Catmint chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
WOW. Just... WOW. This is so tender, so beautiful yet so bittersweet because the ending is looming over them the entire time, which you've captured perfectly. Fantastic emotions, excellent characterisation, powerful writing. I cannot find a single, even tiny, fault with it.
| oknope chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
wow. that was amazing. absolutely fantastic. utterly magnificent. left me speechless. really good. :)
| ncisloverinnc chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
I have no words :) Loved it!
| pirate-princess1 chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
Aw! This concept is sooooo adorable. I love how you used Romeo ad Juliet in comparison to Jean Paul and Sophie. LOVED IT! :)
| Carriex3 chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
| TheNewForensicArtist chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
you wrote in second person... nice
| VivaLaTiva chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
*sniffles* you've totally undone my emotions, i'm gonna be all serene now! This was truly, really beautiful, you really captured them
| SemperFiNeverForget051909 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
I could feel the emotional anguish both characters felt...
I hope that they would really drop their masks at the end.
i love the story.:D
| Yuki's Adorable Girlfriend chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
this was so poetic. so perfect.
great job! :)
| EternalConfusion chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
This was great, I really like the way it was written. It's strange to read things written int he 2nd person, but I think it's quite effective here :)
| wlshygirl79 chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
that was sweet and beautiful...sweetly beautiful!
| swimmer4ever chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Amazing, you have a way with words that is unmatched. The ending was perfect, so like them unwilling to admitt their true feelings.
| Terapsina chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I could write more and tell you how much I enjoyed reading every little part of this work, but like you ended your tale there, I will end the review with - AMAZING!
| BatYisrael chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
| Natalia chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
That was so good it's NOT even funny!
I love Tiva!